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DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
edited October 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
back before we decide what size we're gonna be
we bump into our former selves and have a little talksie.
new self say what power gonna be?
old self speak saying get the one that make you three,
or four or five, you choose it, see, cuz i was
only one and only one it kinda make it boring.
new self pick up infinity now
all the one-people think he crazy
new self think he crazy too
he spent he life at war with two
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  • gue_bariumgue_barium Posts: 5,515
    that be cool.
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    could be cooler, i'm seeing a children's book, maybe?

    shit... why not! :)
  • #X.#X. Posts: 142
    Had to read it a couple times, it's very good with what seems to be a lot of different messages. Each time i read it, it will be different. #X.
    "The Poet is a madman lost in adventure."
    -Paul Verlaine-

    "With me poetry has not been a purpose, but a passion."
    -Edgar Poe-
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    before we decide what size we're gonna be
    we bump into our former selves and have a little talksie.
    new self say what you power gonna be?
    old self speak saying get the one that make you three,
    or four or five, you choose it, see, cuz i was
    only one and it was kinda boring.
    new self pick infinity
    and all the ones think he crazy
    new self think he crazy too
    so he spends he life in war with two






    i t'ink 'at bedda



    t'anx .x
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    very interesting
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    PastaNazi wrote:
    back before we decide what size we're gonna be
    we bump into our former selves and have a little talksie.
    new self say what power gonna be?
    old self speak saying get the one that make you three,
    or four or five, you choose it, see, cuz i was
    only one and only one it kinda make it boring.
    new self pick up infinity now
    all the one-people think he crazy
    new self think he crazy too
    he spent he life at war with two

    Cool!

    I like this ending better than the alternate one
    maybe cause I feel like I've always been at war with different selves... more than 2 even! :p
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
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