my reply to everything today

DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
edited September 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
'twas in the twilight switch
swamper* swarming up enough
to kick a summertime goodbye
the heat was not the lovely thing
the sunburn
or the hangovers
the lovely thing was growing up beneath
becoming us, it still becomes
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  • oh... and a swamper is a kind of air-conditioner
  • JDE-PJJDE-PJ Posts: 721
    it's nice rach.
    I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


    Jason
  • gue_bariumgue_barium Posts: 5,515
    In Arizona we called them swamp-coolers.

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  • yeah... they call 'em that here, too... but i call it the swamper
  • gue_bariumgue_barium Posts: 5,515
    tis also known as an evaporative cooler. ingenious things they are. :)

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  • curiosities of desert-livin'
  • Ian MIan M Posts: 123
    PastaNazi wrote:
    oh... and a swamper is a kind of air-conditioner

    Ah, I see.

    These words were well chosen, especially the last two lines. Sounds like a small pregnancy.

    :)
  • thanks, Ian :)
  • This is one of those that you read and, at first you shake your head in confusion..i'm too lazy to read it again but what the hell it's short. So I read a couple of extra times and go ohhh ohhh yea nice.
    This guy wouldn't know magesty if it bit him in the face- Strong bad

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  • lol... maybe that's why i keep 'em short


    thanks
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