Kwidgy??? I found it...
DopeBeastie
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remember me saying something about a poem i wrote?
you reminded me of it in one of yours...
well, here goes... i changed it a lot... the old sentiment just didn't want to be in it anymore
Nigh End Travesty
The placid truth lie bare and divine.
We failed.
We move on or along.
Our cheek stains wet
with contemptuous regret,
still bruised where false hope smacked hard.
I saw stars.
Flew ‘round my head like a halo for days.
Until Nature forced the heady gait broad.
Until Gravity pulled the dazed Sainthood to ground.
The fallen proofs orbit my ankles
My naked head cautiously pines in the free breeze.
I was so right to leave.
peace yo!
you reminded me of it in one of yours...
well, here goes... i changed it a lot... the old sentiment just didn't want to be in it anymore
Nigh End Travesty
The placid truth lie bare and divine.
We failed.
We move on or along.
Our cheek stains wet
with contemptuous regret,
still bruised where false hope smacked hard.
I saw stars.
Flew ‘round my head like a halo for days.
Until Nature forced the heady gait broad.
Until Gravity pulled the dazed Sainthood to ground.
The fallen proofs orbit my ankles
My naked head cautiously pines in the free breeze.
I was so right to leave.
peace yo!
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