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lilac sidewalk

DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
edited June 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The lilacs slide, all the buttercups
ride up the side of a walk, concrete in thier balking
at mowers and riders, their two-fisted din.
Sell that shrill flower to sea. She is pretty.
She costs more than cotton on Tuesday afternoons.
Smell her, you'll love her, she'll melt in your spoon.
She wont make you babies, but she'll shoot you the moon.
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    ALICE!!!!! :p

    "She costs more than cotton on Tuesday afternoons" --- that just flowed so well! And shoot, if she smells like cotton candy, I'll love her! ;):D

    So many colourful images running through my head as I read this one, melady, very nice. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    PastaNazi wrote:
    The lilacs slide, all the buttercups
    ride up the side of a walk, concrete in thier balking
    at mowers and riders, their two-fisted din.
    Sell that shrill flower to sea. She is pretty.
    She costs more than cotton on Tuesday afternoons.
    Smell her, you'll love her, she'll melt in your spoon.
    She wont make you babies, but she'll shoot you the moon.
    Very nice.
    BUT....
    Will she really shoot me the moon?!!!!
    NOW HER I MUST MEET!!!!!!
    :)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    is very sweet, like a summer day, one month past may.
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    it's funny how words come up in the head
    and the "already used" filter goes on the blink


    TUUUUUUUUESDAY AAAAAAAAFTERNOOOOOON

    LOL


    good assonance in that praseology, i suppose


    yo, waddup jessup? where's yer words?
    hola mi palli
    and alo to ali

    thanx y'all
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    PastaNazi wrote:
    it's funny how words come up in the head
    and the "already used" filter goes on the blink


    TUUUUUUUUESDAY AAAAAAAAFTERNOOOOOON

    LOL


    good assonance in that praseology, i suppose


    yo, waddup jessup? where's yer words?
    hola mi palli
    and alo to ali

    thanx y'all

    Hail hail to the pasta nazi!

    and I thought I was bad calling Eddie vedder Spaghetti-head!
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    my friend calls him Eddie Spaghetti, regardless :)

    i like spaghetti?
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