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see?

DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
have it be
what you wish it, see?
see?
it is that you have known me
kept me
secret
safe
and
bulletproof?

laughing, go
you do your thing

hypertestimony

flicking lip drops
buckets in the sea

see how she is me?

see?


~Rachel
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  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    basking in the sun
    through the trees
    and caressed with love
    the lense that questions
    are asked of invention

    looking through the light for me
    out over the water
    and into the seen
    spurts of nature
    and thought thats saved

    flowers
    and pictures are everywhere
    as i walk away
    i drive away
    and creation says hello
    communication
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    These are both very good.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    holla hello hola yo
    make it so
    make it so
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Pasta Nazi...
    Very short,sweet , and to the point.
    Warhol would be proud.


    allison vigh:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :)

    I see
    a beautiful bee,
    she is free,
    she's starting to see!

    :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    and another fine poetess to be listed on the top o the top five or so poets. ;)
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    and i LOVE lovin kind's tag...

    supa-fine mr.sir :)




    winks hugs and kisses, ladies :D
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    sidewalk banter during lunch hour:
    passing the shop window
    I don't see another me
    ever
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    Bibliobella wrote:
    sidewalk banter during lunch hour:
    passing the shop window
    I don't see another me
    ever

    the record shop:

    all these me's in everything



    ;)
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    Great thread all, enjoyed everything.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    my goodness, every one seems to be conversing in poetry. this is really odd. :)
    woops, that didn't rhyme :D
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    O where o where can that Rachel be?
    She's far too busy at her work, you see
    She's doing invoice shit for builders and plumbers
    Wastin' days like dat, they turn into bummers
    Oh world.

    O where o where can that Rachel be?
    To call my waffle out with fine prottery
    Does she be playin' on New Mexico stages
    Does she be writin' down new manuscript pages
    Unfurled?

    O where o where can that Rachel be?
    The pit's too quiet now, you must agree
    We've had our quibbles but that Rachel's my buddy
    (Rach, get your arse back here! The pit's gettin' cruddy:
    Be told!)

    :)

    I edited, just for nostalgia's sake. :)
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    O where o where can that Rachel be?
    She's far too busy at her work, you see
    She's doing invoice shit for builders and plumbers
    Wastin' days like dat, they turn into bummers
    Oh world.

    O where o where can that Rachel be?
    To call my waffle out with fine prottery
    Does she be playin' on New Mexico stages
    Does she be writin' down new manuscript pages
    Unfurled?

    O where o where can that Rachel be?
    The pit's too quiet now, you must agree
    We've had our quibbles but that Rachel's my buddy
    (Rach, get your arse back here! The pit's gettin' cruddy:
    Be told!)

    :)

    I edited, just for nostalgia's sake. :)

    Fantastic! I really enjoyed that!
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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