the whole beautiful movie
DopeBeastie
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after the blood has fallen out of my head
and we lie together on a humid night
with our skins so soft, and our breaths in tandem,
i start thinking about Patricia Archette's tits in true romance
peach jello molds lolloping beneath a screaming death howl
sincerely busted lips and double shiners
engaging and unloading the sawed-off into Tony Soprano
and then I think about my ex and how I should
just walk in there like I walk into everyplace else.
nothing phases me. no hint of dispirit or disdain colors my mood
as i am seeking the truth, and there is nothing wrong with that
he is by no means, Tony Soprano, afterall
and then i think about yellow chrysanthemums
(they don't smell very good, but that's okay
i can pretend they smell like honeysuckles)
the morning's sunrise and the season's light breeze blows
through the hundred spindlish petals
while i film into memory, the whole beautiful movie
and my breath falls back into tandem
while you reach for the jellybeans
and we lie together on a humid night
with our skins so soft, and our breaths in tandem,
i start thinking about Patricia Archette's tits in true romance
peach jello molds lolloping beneath a screaming death howl
sincerely busted lips and double shiners
engaging and unloading the sawed-off into Tony Soprano
and then I think about my ex and how I should
just walk in there like I walk into everyplace else.
nothing phases me. no hint of dispirit or disdain colors my mood
as i am seeking the truth, and there is nothing wrong with that
he is by no means, Tony Soprano, afterall
and then i think about yellow chrysanthemums
(they don't smell very good, but that's okay
i can pretend they smell like honeysuckles)
the morning's sunrise and the season's light breeze blows
through the hundred spindlish petals
while i film into memory, the whole beautiful movie
and my breath falls back into tandem
while you reach for the jellybeans
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Beautiful writing PN!
And I love how you wrap p the poem with the tandem breaths, making it circular so to speak, back to the original thought.
Very nice.
And hello!! Long time since I've been here!
How are you?
I'm sort of in a limbo state, closing up a chapter of my life, quitting my job and thinking about other things for the future. Something different, maybe living in another country as well, it's all a big question mark so far. But I plan on making 2009 an excellent year.
thank you.
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce