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k'zzbingbang on a pingpong

DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
edited July 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
so suddenly this notion comes
the ocean, light and dark a ride
a raised up skin, a surface slide, a gliding
just beneath
the white teeth spread
a huge, gigantic smile

prickled, pickled ~ love, it's steep
to climb and ride
a raised up skin, a skinning of the night's deep
making time and making love and making sin
again
aged in

hoping
hopping
bobbing to stay up
we're tough nuts
floating on the ocean in the dark




(this is for you. forgive my indulgence. :))
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    oh balls and this inability to edit


    yeah, totally... i meant to put the word "skin" in twice in the same line. yeah, sure i did.



    ffffffffffckffers
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    "We all float down here!" :D

    Oooo, I'm just loving all these references to the water today! Fantastic!

    The climb may be steep
    but boy, the rewards that we reep!!!

    :)

    Really diggin' this one, Pasta! Like a whole lot, girl! :) "hoping, hopping, bopping"--Oh yeah!

    Re: the edit function--it's nice to have, sure but, seems like it ain't gonna change so, guess we'll all just have to cope. :) No biggie--just copy, fix 'er up and re-post!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    [quote="Being Enlightened
    Re: the edit function--it's nice to have, sure but, seems like it ain't gonna change so, guess we'll all just have to cope. :) No biggie--just copy, fix 'er up and re-post![/quote"]

    lol... i'm-a-cope by not doing nothin' :D holla.

    love the water, sets me OFF!


    take care, girlfriend ~ so glad you like :D
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    So. Suddenly this notion comes
    The ocean, light and dark a ride
    a raised up skin, a surface slide, a gliding
    just beneath, a flouride threading in between
    the white teeth spread
    the huge, gigantic smile.

    Prickled, pickled ~ love, it's steep
    to climb and ride
    This raised up skin, a sinking in a night's deep sleep
    Making Time, they're making love and making sin
    again,
    aged in.
    (But it's not really sin, it's more like sloe gin stains on kiss-fat lips.)

    Hoping
    Hopping
    Bobbing to stay up
    We're tough nuts
    Floating on this ocean in the dark.




    (this is for you, steve. forgive my indulgence. today, share and you and me and now, fins all wrote about the water in one sense or another. :))
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