aNOtHeRfucKINgPOEm

DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
edited April 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
[size=+4]W[/size]e never went to see the ships
sail off at dawn, hum. West, and away?
Unsheeted machines drew from ports, Oregon
on toward Japan
obliviously, everyday.

We could have bent the grass to patches, side
by side shouldering each other on the cliffs
wind whipping you,
winding up me
and the grass and the ocean into peaks, everyday.
Obliviously. For Breakfast. Instead.

We stayed home and slept
worrying the dirt in our mouths
with our grind habit,
our inflammable guilt,
and the undying sense.

We've sinned in our sleep.
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  • sinning in sleep..I had a wet dream the other night..aragorn would kick my ass if he knew...
    I examined the title as much as the poem..trying to find some hidden meaning or words in the caps..
    I took a walk so I could curse my ass for being dumb!!!

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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    ooh

    another place to hide meanings


    i wish aragorn would come try to kick my ass :D
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    That's my favourite poem on here, for about the past two years.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    :)



    thank you
  • Astral StarAstral Star Posts: 129
    ocean and grass maringue - Yummy!
    "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to eachother." Mother Theresa
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    wow...

    that's exactly what i was thinking...


    you're good :D
  • ME TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    what are we talking about?
    I took a walk so I could curse my ass for being dumb!!!

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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    whipped stiff peaks


    :D;):D



    holla!




    jus... check my thread in AET, please? You're a young guy... the lady needs some advice :D
  • are those "naughty" something to eat, or both, or neither. or perhaps something I missed in geography
    I took a walk so I could curse my ass for being dumb!!!

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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    well...

    i use meringue in my poetry more than something like cheesecake, or whatever... cuz i make lemon meringue from scratch on thanksgiving and it's really difficult and super yum...

    so, in the recipie, you have to whip egg whites into "stiff peaks"

    and well, i dunno...

    libido suffers the same condition... going from something relatively placid into overdrive.. and since it's a condition i experience here and there... often enough... it

    umm


    hey... you just wanted me to type that out, you d-to-the-double-g
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    it's like the title says it is

    another fucking[/] poem

    or

    not her, fuck

    or


    fuck poe

    or

    fuc-k-ing


    or...



    gah..

    enough already :D
  • yippe yo yippe yay.. j dubz in da mufukn hayowse
    I took a walk so I could curse my ass for being dumb!!!

    www.myspace.com/lastgeneration56
  • all along
    we were whipped
    stiff peaks along the kabob
    my spreading heart throb
    I took a walk so I could curse my ass for being dumb!!!

    www.myspace.com/lastgeneration56
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    oh, and I AM so weak, lol



    :D:D:D:D



    love ya jigga
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