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DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
edited March 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
She must feel like a smooth boy.
All lines and planks, straight up through one cleft to another
Up and landing on her angled chin, mouth open,
moaning with her rough-boy voice, twisting
hips and teasing smiles with her smooth boy charm.
A man with might feel himself at home in her closets,

And beautiful, grown-curve women surround her with guilt.
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    She must feel like a smooth boy
    All lines and planks, straight up through one cleft to another
    Up and landing on her angled chin, mouth open
    moaning with her rough-boy voice, twisting
    hips and teasing smiles with her smooth boy charm
    A man might feel at home inside her closets

    And beautiful, grown-curve women surround her with guilt
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    i've read this 6-7 times. each time i get a different read. i gotta read it again. ;)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    um..yea..i gotta read this a few more times..unique..good job..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    thanks! :):):)
  • gue_bariumgue_barium Posts: 5,515
    When I read it I smell and feel the female woman from the silk and lace lingerie hanging in the closet. I like being here with the door cracked open ever so slightly, looking out, waiting.

    hehee.

    you have a way with words, pasta.
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