shame on you for sleeping

DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
he must have felt her leave the room
pushing past the curtain in the door
even though she made no indication,
she had any place to be
beside, beside, his arm beneath her head

he'd no idea, although imperically he knew
her haunt ran deeper than a stream
beneath a prairie

his dreams went dark, you know
his face slept like a stormy day
while she was outside fantasizing
that somehow she turned time around
and now moved backward, re-becoming what had passed

every now and then,
she'd go back to the bedroom
to fetch a thing or two she needed
she'd see his stormy face,
and blame him for his sleeping
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    that is incredible to me.
    thanks for sharing it.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    Once again, you leave me in awe :o
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • JDE-PJJDE-PJ Posts: 721
    PastaNazi wrote:
    every now and then,
    she'd go back to the bedroom
    to fetch a thing or two she needed
    she'd see his stormy face,
    and blame him for his sleeping


    damn one and doners, eh.


    very visual rach, nice.
    I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


    Jason
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    thanks y'all! :):):)
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