a paige turned, a lesson learned

blueinthefaceblueintheface Posts: 153
paige is a girl. i like somewhat clever titles. ha.

i wish when we were together you didnt have to speak in codes
please just tell me who you really are
please let me know how you really feel.
i have no idea who i am with. and strangers scare me.

i wish when we were together my insides were clothed.
i swear when i kiss you, you can feel my soul
with its scars and tears, made from anger and frustrations of the past
and i swear when i touch you, you can feel my heart
with the fault line down the middle, from past lies and undone promises
i wish you knew what she did to me. maybe i could get some sympathy.
i wish you knew what she did to me. she fucked me up.
thats why i need you. you can feel my heart and soul, but you havent yet
seen my worn out mind, thats hurt.
from being too smart. too paranoid. and too hidden.


i wish a harsh wind would sweep us off our feet
away from everyone else, where no one can judge
or sneer, or complain to me about my shit
im sick and im tired. i thought u were new.
i thought you were different. but im not sure now
im confused and dreaming.
my dreamworld has no lightsource, i rely on you for direction.
"be a philosopher but, amid all your philosophy, be first a man" - david hume

Mitch Hedberg- RIP 1968-2005. your jokes have laughed me through a lot. I thank you.
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Comments

  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Strangers scare you and shes acting like one.NOT GOOD.
    Maybe shes just scared of attention.

    Anyway..very honest poem.:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    i feel you.

    and i hate when people speak in code...especially their own private code that nobody else understands, probably not even themselves most of the time.

    sorry, sore spot.
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • jboelhowjboelhow Posts: 170
    Blueintheface,
    I love the last stanza!!! You lead us to the idea that this girl is real, than hit us with the doubt of her uniqueness. Powerful.
    Live the life you dream

    "Cause I can't wait to figure out what's wrong with me
    So I can say this is the way I use to be" -- John Mayer
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