1:28 on a Monday Morning

blueinthefaceblueintheface Posts: 153
i kissed you last night in my dream
i bet you didnt know that

it's like i am asking for you treat me how you do
begging to be run over by your smile
praying for the insignifance i feel

i want nothing more than to be your home
day and night you could dream about me

i would like you to see through my mask
it has been on so long its rusted
and has become glued to my face
meaning, now, i am masked forever
"be a philosopher but, amid all your philosophy, be first a man" - david hume

Mitch Hedberg- RIP 1968-2005. your jokes have laughed me through a lot. I thank you.
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  • thanks for the compliment.

    and i agree, your last line is a lot better than mine. thanks for that too, appreciated much.
    "be a philosopher but, amid all your philosophy, be first a man" - david hume

    Mitch Hedberg- RIP 1968-2005. your jokes have laughed me through a lot. I thank you.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    i kissed you last night in my dream
    i bet you didnt know that

    it's like i am asking for you treat me how you do
    begging to be run over by your smile
    praying for the insignifance i feel

    i want nothing more than to be your home
    day and night you could dream about me

    i would like you to see through my mask
    it has been on so long its rusted
    and has become glued to my face
    meaning, now, i am masked forever
    I like it..Its a truthful love poem.
    Did you really dream about kissing this person?:)
    I thought I was the only one that had those dreams.....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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