a love and a cry don't mix in poetry

blueintheface

i wish i could write you a song
with every word just as magical
as your touch is to me.

i wish i could write you a sonnet
with every line perfect
as you match my dream mate

i wish i could write you free form
that snaked around like the
beautiful curves of your body.

i wish i had one fucking word
to show you the magnitude
of the force of your landing in my word.

but, as you see, i have nothing
nothing clever, nothing smart,
nothing at all.

so i speak in codes which no one can translate
and i hope by some miracle you understand
tell me you understand
please understand me
hear me, speak as i speak
understand this way.

violet ray

i'm not the right person, but i understand.

damn, i hope someone feels enough to write something like that for me one day.

she's lucky ...hope she gets it... good luck.

ISN

i wish i could write you free form
that snaked around like the
beautiful curves of your body

that's so sensuous.....makes me remember the way sun shone on her skin......you're really physical and you've got a beautiful bag of tricks.....why does she make you feel so miserable.....you make me feel wonderful.....you're wonderful!!!!

blueintheface

thank you ISN, you're truly great. i uh... i havent really figured out why i feel this way (as far as being miserable), i just figured im crazy or something, but writing about helps me. but im really into this girl and writing is such a good process for my mind, thanks for reading, appreciated truly.

Nast

Amillionwaystosayyoudon'thavethewordstosayhowyoufeelcauseyou'renotthatgoodwithwords.