the blinking red light of my mental state.

blueintheface

you have fogged me in.
i can only see the world
through the small FUCK YOU
i painted on the window
with my broken finger.

please rain soon.
wipe away the fog
and my teenage rebellion.

violet ray

someone wrote a fuck you on my window,
and it won't go away.

blueintheface

"that's the whole trouble. you can't ever find a place that's nice and peaceful, because there isnt any. You may think there is, but once you get there, when you're not looking, somebody'll sneak up and write FUCK YOU right under your nose"
- Salinger's Catcher in the Rye

this sort of inspired the writing, not really sure where i went with it. but Holden/Salinger had a point.

Ali

blueintheface wrote:

you have fogged me in.
i can only see the world
through the small FUCK YOU
i painted on the window
with my broken finger.

please rain soon.
wipe away the fog
and my teenage rebellion.

This is good.

Being Enlightened

I really liked Catcher In The Rye. It's been years since I read it but you know, I think it's worth a re-read--thanks for reminding me.

I enjoyed your poem and it's inspiration!