have mercy on this piece

blueinthefaceblueintheface Posts: 153
i am a mess.
i am a construction site.
i make blueprints by the second
for what i hope to look like.

and these dream-like sequences, in which i am damn near perfection
are piling up in my head.
and im losing a sense of what is real and what is wished for.

these days blur together
or atleast the days i am missing you.
i play a part in this play we call life
i have studied my character through and through.
i want you to know he loves you.
"be a philosopher but, amid all your philosophy, be first a man" - david hume

Mitch Hedberg- RIP 1968-2005. your jokes have laughed me through a lot. I thank you.
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I like this one. :)
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    where did u come from.....?

    I like yoru problems......they're so cool....

    I had such a bad time tonight with my ex.....

    we all put each other through so much shit....

    and you sound like a nice kinda guy.....ya know.....like joe regular.....it's so difficult.....and if we can even articulate that......we're half way there.....:)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • haha. ISN your comment made me laugh. i didnt use to want to submit my works on here. everyone writings is so metaphorical and great while mine is just common and dull most of the time. so thats where i have been. anyway, thanks for commenting. and i am kinda of a joe regular, i like to be nice to everyone, and i dont really let people into my mind so everyone always thinks im peachy i suppose. but recently my family and this girl i cant get over have just been making me insane lately. but thanks
    "be a philosopher but, amid all your philosophy, be first a man" - david hume

    Mitch Hedberg- RIP 1968-2005. your jokes have laughed me through a lot. I thank you.
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