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I have no title, I have no brain.

blueinthefaceblueintheface Posts: 153
edited July 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i heard you're arent happy with life.
i want to write you letter, explaining
my old situation, how i used to be more down
than you can probably imagine.
you have an innocent mind.

i am plagued by filth, depression and greed,
I lie for amusement and to make desperate attempts
to gain the control i lack in my personal life.
dont get too near me, I might corrupt you.

you claim you want me in your story.
the story of a beautiful girl, growing up
not knowing what to do and where to go
so you looked for the one that was just as lost as you.
i would win Best Supporting Actor in your life movie.

and my use of words is weak, feeble
and the english language has haunted me.
i think deeply, i write like shit. i wish i had the words
that held the secret phase which then turned
into the long lost key to your locked-up heart.

these falls are so long, so hard and so deep
climbing back up the cfliff
doesn't even seem worth it.
"be a philosopher but, amid all your philosophy, be first a man" - david hume

Mitch Hedberg- RIP 1968-2005. your jokes have laughed me through a lot. I thank you.
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Comments

  • LeaderOfMenLeaderOfMen Posts: 110
    blueintheface wrote:
    dont get too near me, I might corrupt you.
    felt like that before
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    blueintheface wrote:
    i heard you're arent happy with life.
    i want to write you letter, explaining
    my old situation, how i used to be more down
    than you can probably imagine.
    you have an innocent mind.

    i am plagued by filth, depression and greed,
    I lie for amusement and to make desperate attempts
    to gain the control i lack in my personal life.
    dont get too near me, I might corrupt you.

    you claim you want me in your story.
    the story of a beautiful girl, growing up
    not knowing what to do and where to go
    so you looked for the one that was just as lost as you.
    i would win Best Supporting Actor in your life movie.

    and my use of words is weak, feeble
    and the english language has haunted me.
    i think deeply, i write like shit. i wish i had the words
    that held the secret phase which then turned
    into the long lost key to your locked-up heart.

    these falls are so long, so hard and so deep
    climbing back up the cfliff
    doesn't even seem worth it.
    If you were in my life,I'd say,VERY TRUE IN YOUR MIND.
    But as the page turns,Blue,People perceive you probably in a better light than you think.:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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