an exercise in sound

blueinthefaceblueintheface Posts: 153
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
A warm May morning
the sky sits silent,
still.
I have just awoken
to the city
breathing,
motionless,
and easy
in the lofty spring atmosphere.

I will soon drive,
top down,
the wind
slowly unwinding,
brushing
my soft made hair.
Touch me.

Traffic slows.
Train approaching.

The train will not roll,
it will shake and quake
the town and break
the black, broken asphalt
that lies in surrender
under the train's tyranny.
Any protest that stands
will face friction and power
the have never seen.
It's velocity steamrolls as it passes my car
and the noise it emits drowns out the turned-up music I play
letting every four notes sound inbetween each wheel
hitting the unmistakable bump in the middle of the tracks.

I will see the train, in metaphor of course,
taking its steel, factory produced fist and punching and striking
"be a philosopher but, amid all your philosophy, be first a man" - david hume

Mitch Hedberg- RIP 1968-2005. your jokes have laughed me through a lot. I thank you.
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  • A warm May morning
    the sky sits silent,
    still.
    I have just awoken
    to the city
    breathing,
    motionless,
    and easy
    in the lofty spring atmosphere.

    I will soon drive,
    top down,
    the wind
    slowly unwinding,
    brushing
    my soft made hair.
    Touch me.

    Traffic slows.
    Train approaching.

    The train will not roll,
    it will shake and quake
    the town and break
    the black, broken asphalt
    that lies in surrender
    under the train's tyranny.
    Any protest that stands
    will face friction and power
    the have never seen.
    It's velocity steamrolls as it passes my car
    and the noise it emits drowns out the turned-up music I play
    letting every four notes sound inbetween each wheel
    hitting the unmistakable bump in the middle of the tracks.

    I will see the train, in metaphor of course,
    taking its steel, factory produced fist and punching and striking down,
    leaving no one in their safeties and all tremble in the face of its power.
    And in one swoop,
    like a conductors hand,
    its gone,
    moving into distance,
    and the clean air,
    gathers,
    marking the return
    of the gentle
    air
    that moves me
    ever so
    slightly.
    "be a philosopher but, amid all your philosophy, be first a man" - david hume

    Mitch Hedberg- RIP 1968-2005. your jokes have laughed me through a lot. I thank you.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I like the pictures in this one. :)
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