sarcasm vs sincerity- the steel cage match

blueintheface

i took this shockage bit of writing
from what i've seen on bathroom walls
all around the country, in the smallest
of farmtowns, to a bursting metropolis


i have found that the numb exist
among us everywhere our life takes us
with no longer a care, they do not seek
our opinions or preconceptions, they
only care to make it through the day

i found that boredom creeps into even
the disciplined, forcing them to look
past their bounds and limits and live
for once in their own definition of
freedom, only to be brought down
by the system claiming freedom


and lastly, i found that love exists
perhaps only to kill us, to weaken
our moral restrictions bend and break
for the one we think we have found.
ah, it seems as though lives have been
thrown away for this four letter creation.

violet ray

blueintheface wrote:

and lastly, i found that love exists
perhaps only to kill us, to weaken
our moral restrictions bend and break
for the one we think we have found.
ah, it seems as though lives have been
thrown away for this four letter creation.

so so true.

by the way, i've read others by you...you're very good.

blueintheface

thanks violet. appreciated. i hoped some people would agree with some of the things i said in this. i suppose these are most of the real things i've learned about humans in my short 17 year life so far.
but thanks for the compliment, always feels good