talking to you is like playing darts.

blueinthefaceblueintheface Posts: 153
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i said goodnight to you last night.
i dont think you heard it though,
you must have been sleeping,
plus i wasn't even with you,
physically that is.


i take it back the second i say it
i dont want to jump to anything
i dont want to hurry you

i dont want to hurry you i dont want you to feel like we are going to fast and you dont have time to think and you get scared and blank and do something you regret and everytime you see me you see that regret and not my loving face.

but i said it.
because thats how i feel about you now.
"be a philosopher but, amid all your philosophy, be first a man" - david hume

Mitch Hedberg- RIP 1968-2005. your jokes have laughed me through a lot. I thank you.
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    I love the honesty of your poems, like I've said before......they're so real......I want to emulate that rushed truth, if I don't already write like that......
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • i always find myself upset if i hold something back when im writing, so lately i have been trying to be honest and be just kinda let it go. thanks tho isn, appreciated
    "be a philosopher but, amid all your philosophy, be first a man" - david hume

    Mitch Hedberg- RIP 1968-2005. your jokes have laughed me through a lot. I thank you.
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