my relief pitcher (of beer)

blueintheface

i happened to glance at the clouds yesterday
and in their mirrorless matter
they still somehow managed
to reflect your beauty into my eyes.

i fell into a bottle of death yesterday.
the poison is still living in my veins
and my tainted blood
now makes me head spin and shout.

my imperfections bleed through my skin
my frustrations sweat through my shirt
my soberness leaves through my blood.
and im falling down and down and down.

please tell me you want to spend time in my arms
im lonely and pouring another shot
ill be dead someday.

ISN

ah, yes, the heartfelt outpourings of the lonely lover which get more eloquent with each glass of wine/beer......what we really need is love.......and plastic is no longer acceptable........we really need love......(you know the JC variety), and I will personally organise a deep grave for people who think that things and money are an alternative to love.......I will involve myself in teh ethnic cleansing of the love-deficient......personally, blueintheface, I think you have added whole territories to the map of love, but as I am a child of the brain, I can only admonish my fellow-logicians to promote this heartfelt humanity.......a vision that you are part of......do I sound crazy?....and if I do, what of it......I embrace my madness......and think many people would be better off if they had gone through my experiences.....so I'm crazy......I'm a madwoman who agrees with you.......it doesn't detract from your wonderful poem

depopulationINC

the bottle is not enough
'all you need is love'
but is love a crutch or the club that pounds one to the bottle
if you have love is that enough
what if the love you seek is not enough
it should be, but what if it ends

what then

pacifier

and when you reach the bottom of your glass, what will you find? emtiness at last.

ISN

or just p

(eeeeeeeeee)

maybe you'll emty yourself and get rid of your p

pacifier

ISN wrote:

or just p

(eeeeeeeeee)

maybe you'll emty yourself and get rid of your p

:( it was late, i was tired and my brain just spelt it like i say it. I suck at spelling....and anything else to do with English

ISN

I wasn't making fun of you honey.......I just noticed that the missing peeeee......might be the result of too much beer, and emptying yourself of Pee......might just be the solution.......it was only lighthearted......:)

pacifier

ISN wrote:

I wasn't making fun of you honey.......I just noticed that the missing peeeee......might be the result of too much beer, and emptying yourself of Pee......might just be the solution.......it was only lighthearted......:)

ok. that makes sense. but i still suck at english

ISN

well I suck at German, but who cares

pacifier

ISN wrote:

well I suck at German, but who cares

Two things , one - I've been usins english and only english my whole life (24 years), you would think I would have caught on by now

and two (and this is REALLY bad) I'm studying to become a primary school teacher! Hope I don't teach them bad habits.

But no really I am ok if I can sit down and think for a while and then go over what I have written an edit it. I think my real problem with English is lazyness. Anyway, I'm wrecking someones good thread here, so I'll shut up now

ISN

as long as you teach them love honey, that's all they need......and I don't think you can fail in that area