Let's all make a poem :P

neeuqneeuq Posts: 9
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Let's all make a poem!!
I start with some words and then you do the same..and we'll see in what it ends...guess we'll talk about love right?
Try to show some pj inspiration!!:p


Feeling...rest my face in a warm shoulder
There's nothing like love..to keep us from living colder

....



well..just continue...I'll make a song of that:P
"If you love someone set them free..if someone loves you don't fuck up.." Eddie Vedder
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  • The heat always rises, and your words become fog
    The frost fills your whispers, and our bed a gulag
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    well you know how bed is when you first get in...
    especially when it's cold outside
    the bed is colder than a heart break
    get in and shiver yourself warm
    shiver yourself in my shoulder and wrap
    your elbows around my stiffening calm
    stick your knees like greater than signs
    under and over and around these pliant
    supple apostrophes
    and we will write songs in milk
    It's all yellow.


  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
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  • neeuqneeuq Posts: 9
    try just to post a few lines so that it don't lose sense!:p



    Loving...words softly spoken on my ear
    On those yesterdays I remember now and here


    ....

    :P
    "If you love someone set them free..if someone loves you don't fuck up.." Eddie Vedder
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