not finished but i'm tired so it's finished

CBBoot

i fake a fall because i'm humble
there is no place for me to fall
i wish for you a sun lit candle
that fills your eyes with deep blue green
you stumble on because i made you
why won't you leave before i'm gone
so you say to me "you little fucker"
"is there a car for me to drive"
six years ago the world split open
there passed some life between our hands

ISN

unusually......I like this.....I wish I had some history with someone......all I have is fukkin bird seed......ya know......meal......but you sound like you have something there for good or ill.......what I'd give to fall in love.....sounds good.....take heart.....the vikings had all the answers!!!!!! (I'm drunk.....I jus felt like saying that.;.....and who knows......mebbe they did......)......I'm so tired......these days......but I understand what you're saying.....I'd feel a lot better if I didn't......but I do......twit twit twoo.....take heart.....take tranquilisers.......take something.......for your pain......something should relieve our pain......someday our pain will be relieved......one day!!!!

CBBoot

ISN wrote:

unusually......I like this.....I wish I had some history with someone......all I have is fukkin bird seed......ya know......meal......but you sound like you have something there for good or ill.......what I'd give to fall in love.....sounds good.....take heart.....the vikings had all the answers!!!!!! (I'm drunk.....I jus felt like saying that.;.....and who knows......mebbe they did......)......I'm so tired......these days......but I understand what you're saying.....I'd feel a lot better if I didn't......but I do......twit twit twoo.....take heart.....take tranquilisers.......take something.......for your pain......something should relieve our pain......someday our pain will be relieved......one day!!!!

this is a response and a poem, it's a respoem haha. i like your interpretation, although it means something else to me. i like it when people draw on different things from the work on here. differing views help us see what we couldn't before.

ISN

that's so cool......I'm glad you liked my repoem......I gotta fukkin go man.....I'm runnin on empty.....I gotta fukkin go....keep your shit happening.......I don't care what any1 else says, I lik3 it!!!!! (fukkin so on the defensive tonite.......shiiiiiiiiteeeeee)......smiles to you sunshine