what if?

stickboystickboy Posts: 2,981
my mind is my temple
worship it
and use it for a sample
my body, my cell
do I represent heaven or hell
i can never tell.
my heart is my guide
and my eyes are the light
to my left and my right
I'm blessed with 2 hands
and I use them to fight.
My fingers to write
and 2 legs for transporters
funny how it all works together in order
My head is my recorder
and my voice is the feedback
my ass is exactly that
a hole and a crack
and my pivates is what gets women fat
in 9 months flat.
When I tan I shed skin,
when I'm cold my dingaling
likes to hide in.
Look at all at the things,
we have been so blessed
and how we've been touched,
till one day it all ends
ashes to ashes and dust to dust.
so on and so on,
we move forth
and we live on
and one day your gone,
and youre left with all these cliches
of how you have seen way better days.
Well, fuck! We all have
the question still remains....
Is this gonna BE one of them DAYS?
Aah, fuck it, I’m just gonna go home, turn on the fuckin’ TV...
Watch the nightly news and drink a beer...
Like I could even change the world, yeah right...
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Comments

  • wow, really good.......



    and if u honestly want to know what i felt or what i thought when i read it....is penis, thats all i could think of



    please keep writing
    i miss you already...


  • This was one of the most interesting descriptions of the human anatomy I've seen to date. My favorite part is the epiphany at the end, which presents such a strong irony after your extensive desciption of the human body and it's autonomy.
  • Originally posted by robertthecat
    This was one of the most interesting descriptions of the human anatomy I've seen to date. My favorite part is the epiphany at the end, which presents such a strong irony after your extensive desciption of the human body and it's autonomy.


    ure very good with words, thats how i felt when i read it just couldnt get it down..thanks
    i miss you already...


  • stickboystickboy Posts: 2,981
    thanx a lot guys.It really means a lot to me. :D
    Aah, fuck it, I’m just gonna go home, turn on the fuckin’ TV...
    Watch the nightly news and drink a beer...
    Like I could even change the world, yeah right...
    ************************************
  • myblood2myblood2 Posts: 74
    good shit stickboy.
    .......
    Forever and ever ....Pearl Jam
    .......
  • stickboystickboy Posts: 2,981
    Originally posted by myblood2
    good shit stickboy.
    :D:D:D:D
    again, Thank you so much !
    Aah, fuck it, I’m just gonna go home, turn on the fuckin’ TV...
    Watch the nightly news and drink a beer...
    Like I could even change the world, yeah right...
    ************************************
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