Picture me.

romybianromybian Posts: 1,644
edited December 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Close your eyes,
picture me walking in,
I look you in the eye,
you sit still.
I take 3 steps and smile,
you wonder who I am
I walk to you, hold your head,
I tell you I don't really care.
I kiss your lips, you breathe me in.
I hold your hands,
put them around my back.
You let yourself go,
I take you around the globe.
The lights are off,
We're growing up.
You say my name,
I say "don't say"
You ask me why?
I say "I'd stay"
You ask me where?
Inside your eyes.
We fall asleep,
I wake you up,
take my kiss back,
and cover you up,

..........................I die,
turn into a memory,
you turn into a kid.
I vanish in the wind,
you learn to play again.
"The joke in your language won't come out the same" (Tom Petty)
I'm no dude! Dudette!
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Comments

  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    nice poetry reallyu sad though
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    i like parts of this poem but some of it hurts to much for me

    still your writing is 100 percent
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • romybianromybian Posts: 1,644
    Hurt me,
    And hurt yourself.
    Let us love,
    Then go away.
    We'll cry,
    We'll fall appart,
    But Still....
    Hurt me,
    And Hurt Yourself.
    "The joke in your language won't come out the same" (Tom Petty)
    I'm no dude! Dudette!
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    i like them both.
    thank you.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • romybianromybian Posts: 1,644
    chadwick wrote:
    i like them both.
    thank you.
    Thank you for reading.
    :)
    "The joke in your language won't come out the same" (Tom Petty)
    I'm no dude! Dudette!
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