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Wear and Tear

romybianromybian Posts: 1,644
edited November 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Under false pretenses
that I made myself believe,
I wore away my senses,
and let you saunter in.

Being my awareness
a weary warden with a pellet gun,
you step into my warren,
Unchallenged, free and undenied.

Entangled in your trifles.
Distracted by your glare,
I gave in my ambitions,
And let you glaze my stare.

Now, knowing that I stagger,
you stand in future's stead,
and with endearing shimmer,
you blind my sight and fade.
"The joke in your language won't come out the same" (Tom Petty)
I'm no dude! Dudette!
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  • geniegenie Posts: 2,222
    romybian wrote:
    Under false pretenses
    that I made myself believe,
    I wore away my senses,
    and let you saunter in.

    Being my awareness
    a weary warden with a pellet gun,
    you step into my warren,
    Unchallenged, free and undenied.

    Entangled in your trifles.
    Distracted by your glare,
    I gave in my ambitions,
    And let you glaze my stare.

    Now, knowing that I stagger,
    you stand in future's stead,
    and with endearing shimmer,
    you blind my sight and fade.

    this is amazing!! i know you're angry about something, but it certainly made you write a great poem
  • romybianromybian Posts: 1,644
    genie wrote:
    this is amazing!! i know you're angry about something, but it certainly made you write a great poem
    Thank you!!!
    I am pissed, fucked up situation but I don't resent it since it inspires me to create... It's just a phase anyway :)
    "The joke in your language won't come out the same" (Tom Petty)
    I'm no dude! Dudette!
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