Again

romybian

Following his dream,
he came to see the truth,
far from papers and commands,
realized it was all life,
fell in love with respect,
understood love, faith, and fate.
He had it all wrong,
He had to make it right.

Crossed the line,
following his own will
crossed the line
suddenly, his soul was set free.

and to know she was scared of him,
hard to communicate with words,
eyes took the place mouth had left,
shining, they missbehaved,
letting it grow till there was noone to blame,
love made its way,
but still, still...
there was a bill to pay.

crossed the line,
following his own will,
crossed the line,
suddenly, his mind was set free.

kids looking up to the man in the hat,
the way he could comprehend,
without knowing what they had to say,
the river as a whitness,
the sky as a reminder.
He watched, and trusted life,
with life, and trust, and life.

crossed the line,
following his own will,
crossed the line,
suddenly, his heart was set free.

Hard roads ahead, and a present to preserve,
a new life to get, a past, to forget.
Chasing what he'd left behing,
trying to protect what now was his whole life,
ended up being abused,
by the traidors he'd betrayed.
but once again, love found it's way,
crossed the line,
and won,
again.

((Help?.... corrections, suggestions.. I'd appreciate.:)))

catefrances

this is quite good. can i assume that english is not your first language. you did well with your expression if that's the case.
post some more.

romybian

Him.-
Following other's dream,
got dangerously close to the line,
far from orders and commands,
Settled for living and dismissed life.
he took respect on a date,
Cheated on it with faith.
The poor boy had it all wrong,
But somehow his questions were right.

At age 24, he crossed the line
Resigned from direction of mind
Aware of the weather in a metal tent,
long before screaming, the message was sent.

Now 26, he doubted himself,
too strong a feeling to let it stay
afraid to give life to his words,
sacrificed a mouth for two eyes and a note.
Brave, he misbehaved.
let passion grow till there was no one to blame.
too weak to go all the way
Asked for the bill he would never pay.

Her.-
Coming from difference, headed to choice
Run into his requests for an uninvited voice
Stripped of opinions that cared,
All in all her smile was no longer scared.
Survived survival with a can of lust,
With lyrics, no chords and a guitar.
Redemption meant nothing but a chance to deprive
her humble emotions from their righ to get high.

No means to change the hand,
No cards to play it right.
She fell and trusted life,
with life, and trust, and life.



Them.-
Hard roads ahead, and a past to preserve,
a new life to create, a present to forget.
Chasing what they left behind,
Just to make sure it won't ever come back.