Bright, Grey, Dark Night

Swan

I loved a love that loved me back
As bright as the sun
As loud as a gun
Shot
It was in the begining
I loved a love with a love so strong
It hurt
I knew I was right, I thought I could overcome
But my love was wrong.

Then...
One day.
The bright sun shine of my love turned gray
And I knew my love was almost at it's end.
I can' explain it, I can't say how it
Happened
The rain came and the love that i loved
Was gone.

I wish I could have made things better
I wish I could have convinced my love
To stay

My love went from bright as the sun
To a gray rainy day
to a dark lonely night

The Love that I loved couldn't love me back.

Love objective

Full on!! That poem fully depicts my first true love. I was on the outher side though. And well to go into a bit of detail, She was my moon godess and i was her sun god!! These days some of my friends call me rain god. CRAZY MARY!!! To be honest, i never left her because of insuficent love! I laked preception and light. I have writen many song's about her over te past year's and one of them is called jilt. I have posted this one on this board. I hope it speeks to you. Much love.