"The Green Light"

Earthy Rebellion

You get the green light,
go on, make this your ultimate chance!
Brake the chains!!**

EarthReb
Trondheim, Norway, 03.06.2005

Ali

I intend to....thanks!!!!!!:):):):):):);)

ISN

yeah?

look it's break okay.....break the chains.....otherwise it jus sounds stupid......or dumb......brake the chains makes me think of a bicycle.....I'm only telling you this, because I can't respond to your poems.....if you can't even get across some semblance of English in them.....(I speak a bit of Spanish and a bit of French and Korean, in case you want to say that it's a big deal for you to write the most crap poems in English, and you're doing us a favour!!!! like I said to that women who kept trying to write these epic profound poems in English, which had glaring errors, I'd be a hypocrite if I didn't point out such major, insurpassable errors to you, and you might be in a totally unwarranted comfort zone......)......it's only a matter of consulting a dictionary.....I use a dictionary daily.....and English is my first language.....but brake the chains (if I were crueller), would be a completely laughable mistake......plus it's not poetry