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darkrosedarkrose Posts: 40
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I felt the love, once.
Had I been indifferent.
The outcome may have been different.
Now I'm damaged, instead of delighted.
Deranged in the head.
My haunted bitter past gets excited.
Seeking it's ultimate revenge.
Resurrecting that tear soaked pillow.
Stabbed it with life.
A feather of truth splits in between.
Such a vengeful knife.
And I am the fined.
Alone I shall be.
No man want's a piece.
Of something as loyal as me.
I'll hunt down the lies, myself.
Reading his eye's.
While his hands slide up my thighs.
This is the result.
A woman representing.
A life not worth taking.
Along the path of repeated goodbye's.
The crossroads provide nothing but broken wing's.
And the screaming sound's as thousands of angel's cry.
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Comments

  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    It's so sad to see all the wounded and bleeding women in this poetry section. I hope your writing helps you feel less hurt. :(
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  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    women bleed louder than men...


    ...just part of who we are...
    (being used to the common sight of it and all... i think it's part of what makes us less afraid to otherwise shed - oh... am i breeching taboo again??? sorry :D)






    darkrose? i have wondered where you've *been*... keep writing, keep posting (if you will :)), and i will definitely keep reading...

    thanks :D






    (and it's not that no man wants this subject's loyalty, just that particular asswipe ;) be well :))
    It's all yellow.


  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Originally posted by Yellow
    women bleed louder than men...


    ...just part of who we are...
    (being used to the common sight of it and all... i think it's part of what makes us less afraid to otherwise shed - oh... am i breeching taboo again??? sorry :D)


    I perhaps made the suggestion when I mentioned bleeding.....:p

    I think you're right about the loudness. Men are probably more likely to suffer in silence when they have broken hearts.
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  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    Originally posted by darkrose
    I'm an Animal now!


    well! God Bless Love :D be it of self or from another... God Bless it all :):):)










    *i'm strangely moved to do a little touch-down dance*

    :D
    It's all yellow.


  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    Originally posted by justam
    Men are probably more likely to suffer in silence when they have broken hearts.


    there are some very interesting differences in the way men emote pain and the way women do... almost the effect of pushing postitive pole to positive pole, which would obviously be painful for both to feel all of that stress




    ah.... but the flipping cat and mouse "thang" continues, doesn't it?




    thank goddess :D
    It's all yellow.


  • Thanks, Yellow!
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