dive

Chad SexingtonChad Sexington Posts: 30
edited December 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
pushed in
tries to swim
gasps for air
outlook's dim

moment's notice
jumps right in
failed to notice
cannot swim

standing around
bumped right in
inadervent
still, sent in

no room to move
no room around
a room of water
in which to drown

another day
right back in
drying off
wears mighty thin
"Did I say corpse hatch? I meant innocence tube" - Mr. Burns
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Comments

  • the last quatrain=really cool!

    Way to go!
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  • the last quatrain=really cool!

    Way to go!

    thank you :)
    "Did I say corpse hatch? I meant innocence tube" - Mr. Burns
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