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Chad SexingtonChad Sexington Posts: 30
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
wait, wait, wait...
let them fall
gently, be gentle
the more you force
the more they rise

consciousness is oxygen
fuel for the fire
of all the desires
the earthly possessions
entirely one focus
a single obsession

tomorrow'll be better
tomorrow's been forever
the morning's resolve
yields the night's remorse
the desire so simple
but a reward so sweet

can't shut it off
scary as hell
can't play it safely
doesn't work so well
a curse and a blessing
one and the same

over and over
and over and over
and over and over
oooh, it's getting bet...
nope, it's over again
"Did I say corpse hatch? I meant innocence tube" - Mr. Burns
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Comments

  • up
    still up
    always up
    always down
    can't fall
    can't rise

    clueless
    curses
    circles
    cycles
    psyche
    sick of it all
    son of a bitch
    "Did I say corpse hatch? I meant innocence tube" - Mr. Burns
  • FaolFaol Posts: 8
    A glimpse into a desperate man's mind? Makes it difficult ot breathe, sounds like he's suffocating. Stark and furious. It's great.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    ^ditto....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Obi OnceObi Once Posts: 918
    very powerfull! kudos!
    your light's reflected now
  • thanks everyone. :)


    there's definitely A LOT of frustration in there.
    "Did I say corpse hatch? I meant innocence tube" - Mr. Burns
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