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Tell me if you like this chorus please

mikeswastelandmikeswasteland Posts: 7
edited January 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I've been thinking of making a song about chicks that I talk to that act like they like me but then they mention their boyfriend and how cool he is and well you know how it goes...

don't tell me this time, my bad
why can't things just be simple


i haven't thought of other lyrics but i like to come up with the chorus and build off of that.

Also does anyone have any good band names? Please email me
Fuck the Pope and his goofy hat!
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  • A Surprise LeftA Surprise Left Posts: 743
    that is good although from just those two lines it is not obvious that is the subject matter but that can also be a good thing. you really have to hate that situation!
    The wind is blowing cold
    Have we lost our way tonight?
    Have we lost our hope to sorrow?

    Feels like were all alone
    Running further from what’s right
    And there are no more heroes to follow

    So what are we becoming?
    Where did we go wrong?
  • Q-Tip18Q-Tip18 Posts: 21
    sounds like you just want to keep it simple and fuck on the down low. Nobody needs to know. But then you say "mybad" and that makes it moral. It's a world weary theme your dealing with. George Costanza put it best, "They like me, I don't like them. I like them, they don't like me." That's my impression from a casual reading. You may be on a different track. Go back to it when you can. It's cool.
    Yeah, it's like why do we have deny that spark of true connection Also, people become more confident and attractive when they are taken. Nothings sexier than a wedding ring.

    I got one that's like:

    "She and her girl got lots of friends that'd like to take her off my hands."

    About one of those cool girls that only hang out with guys(I love 'em). The Tomboy who grew tits. This particular one had one girlfriend, the rest were dudes. Once we started dating all her platonic "friends" got interested all of a sudden.
  • A Surprise LeftA Surprise Left Posts: 743
    talking Seinfeld also like that episode where George pretends that hot girl is his dead finance and then that nice looking secetary becomes interested in someone she wouldn't have looked twice at!
    The wind is blowing cold
    Have we lost our way tonight?
    Have we lost our hope to sorrow?

    Feels like were all alone
    Running further from what’s right
    And there are no more heroes to follow

    So what are we becoming?
    Where did we go wrong?
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