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hailhailkchailhailkc Posts: 582
edited February 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Distance
Adheres to the thoughts

Controlling, evoking, releasing


Children
Fading into biege

Rivers, smile, apprehension


Wretched
Loving as a brother

Smoke, coarse, ashen


Red
Divided by green

Black, brown, blue
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    hey....welcome guy.....:)

    I like it.....enigmatic.....(beige - sp)......it's got some kind of purity......cheers.....good job......stay a while.....write some more.....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • hailhailkchailhailkc Posts: 582
    ISN wrote:
    hey....welcome guy.....:)

    I like it.....enigmatic.....(beige - sp)......it's got some kind of purity......cheers.....good job......stay a while.....write some more.....

    Oops! I did spell that wrong! LOL! Thank you for the compliments...I will definately write some more! Thanks! :)
    MOSSAD NATO Alphabet Stations (E10)
    High Traffic ART EZI FTJ JSR KPA PCD SYN ULX VLB YHF
    Low Traffic CIO MIW
    Non Traffic ABC BAY FDU GBZ HNC NDP OEM ROV TMS ZWL
  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    HHKC veturing into new territory. Good for you. This is a super place to hang around and read. Not a bad write up for the first time in here. Good on ya! Hope to read some more as the months roll on.
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    hailhailkc wrote:
    Children
    Fading into biege

    This is a very original poem! The line above - I haven't read anything near to it. . . . Excellent!
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
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  • hailhailkchailhailkc Posts: 582
    Thanks evenflow? and Bibliobella...appreciate the nice words. I'll definately write some more! It's fun in here! Very....peaceful! ;)
    MOSSAD NATO Alphabet Stations (E10)
    High Traffic ART EZI FTJ JSR KPA PCD SYN ULX VLB YHF
    Low Traffic CIO MIW
    Non Traffic ABC BAY FDU GBZ HNC NDP OEM ROV TMS ZWL
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    wow

    I love poems that use less words
    but you can read soooo many times
    to get sense of meaning :)

    i love it.
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • AbookamongstthemanyAbookamongstthemany Posts: 8,209
    Beautiful and intense...thanks for sharing it w/ us Shawn. Do continue to post your writings. I'll be looking forward to more.
    If you want to tell people the truth, make them laugh, otherwise they'll kill you.

    Man is least himself when he talks in his own person. Give him a mask, and he will tell you the truth.
    -Oscar Wilde
  • hailhailkchailhailkc Posts: 582
    Thank you rargh and abatm...I look forward to seeing your poetry and art too! :)
    MOSSAD NATO Alphabet Stations (E10)
    High Traffic ART EZI FTJ JSR KPA PCD SYN ULX VLB YHF
    Low Traffic CIO MIW
    Non Traffic ABC BAY FDU GBZ HNC NDP OEM ROV TMS ZWL
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