Comfort Her....by Kwyjibo
eden
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Comfort Her
(just wanna make sure no-one missed this piece of beauty, it was hidden in another thread)
The stars and the streetlights blurring with the leaves.
Tears in our eyes creating the scene.
A watercolor world, willed into existence.
Tears now streaming down your cheeks,
the fiery passion dissolved into something weak.
Your bare shoulders pale in the twilight,
I kissed your forehead, wanting to set it right.
You seem to attract those types of guys
like bees to honey, yet you're always surprised.
I'm not like that, I swear to God in heaven.
I'll sit with you all night if I have to, I'll stay right here.
the memory will disappear.
The world knows that he is the fool
No man is good enough for your tears
no man is good enough for you.
(*sigh*
)
(just wanna make sure no-one missed this piece of beauty, it was hidden in another thread)
The stars and the streetlights blurring with the leaves.
Tears in our eyes creating the scene.
A watercolor world, willed into existence.
Tears now streaming down your cheeks,
the fiery passion dissolved into something weak.
Your bare shoulders pale in the twilight,
I kissed your forehead, wanting to set it right.
You seem to attract those types of guys
like bees to honey, yet you're always surprised.
I'm not like that, I swear to God in heaven.
I'll sit with you all night if I have to, I'll stay right here.
the memory will disappear.
The world knows that he is the fool
No man is good enough for your tears
no man is good enough for you.
(*sigh*
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like bees to honey, yet you're always surprised.
I'm not like that, I swear to God in heaven.
I'll sit with you all night if I have to, I'll stay right here.
you have impeccable taste eden.. i hadn't seen that poem, so thanks for saving it.
Thanks but its Kwyjibos brilliance
I would rather have a guy write me a poem than buy
me a 10 ct. diamond ring, Im serious.
well we all know diamonds are forever, so what exactly does a poem get a guy from the great garden?
...nice signature..
asparagus.
Haha...well, I at least steam, season and butter it..
then display it on a beautiful platter for you
and asparagus has always been my favorite vegetable... how'd you know that Endorphin?
lucky guess,I guess.
but I have a feeling any veggie I mentioned would have been your favorite.
haha, no way! definately asparagus is the true winner. my grandfather used to grow his own, still does some years.. sooooo delicious!
on the whole vegetables are mostly boring to me.. besides asparagus, i seem the rest of them as supplements for meat or sandwhiches.. or the obvious salad situations..
grapes, cherries, and kiwis are where the fun is.. eden you got anything like that growing inside?
Glad you ,like my sig.
Its part of a poem Im working on.
A work in progress.
ahhh..
it sounds like one of those challenges that is agonizingly enjoyable.. the kind that are so tough that that is a large part of the point..
i hope it turns out well!