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Pearl_Jam_NecklacePearl_Jam_Necklace Posts: 501
edited January 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
You should have taken me...
for i have lived long enough....
instead you took my daughter...
i've never had life so rough...

i hate that im alive
i'm scared of what i'll do
i cannot bring her back
and neither can you...

the depth of my sorrow
it scares the hell out of me..
i dont care about tomorrow...
her face is all i see...

i've wandered from my home...
turned my back & walked away...
now im all alone...
would she want it this way?
...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
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  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,275
    poem on a blank sheet flip
    poem on a blank sheet
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  • dreamncolordreamncolor Posts: 380
    :( :( :(
    there are no words for you.....my deepest, deepest sympathy. i truly hope you find your peace.
    i'll ride the wave where it takes me
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    This poem expresses to me the reality of conflicting emotions in beravement. I am so sorry for your loss. I am also moved by the way you express such complex and torrid felings and thoughts within such a measured and dignified form. May peace come to your heart, Thank you for sharing these words.
  • Pearl_Jam_NecklacePearl_Jam_Necklace Posts: 501
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    This poem expresses to me the reality of conflicting emotions in beravement. I am so sorry for your loss. I am also moved by the way you express such complex and torrid felings and thoughts within such a measured and dignified form. May peace come to your heart, Thank you for sharing these words.


    thankyou i wrote it right there on the screen and forgot to title it,lol,it kinda just came out .
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
  • electronblueelectronblue WPB Florida Posts: 3,460
    very beautiful, Kalena..~
    ********************************
    "Forgive every being,
    the bad feelings 
    it's just me"


  • Pearl_Jam_NecklacePearl_Jam_Necklace Posts: 501
    Sorrow
    sorrow came to visit me
    and loneliness came,too...
    i woke up to no sunshine
    in my life was missing you...
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
  • Pearl_Jam_NecklacePearl_Jam_Necklace Posts: 501
    the night was black when tragedy struck
    and the full moon hid and did cry...
    and i love the one that passed away
    and i loved her more than life....
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
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