In The Dark

In The Dark

in the dark...
i cry my tears for you...
i cry so hard
&you know its true...

you were so good for me
but now you're gone...
&i dont know
if i can carry on....

here in the dark
i let my thoughts run wild...
i would give everything
just to see you smile....

oh , in the dark
i let my tears fall hard....
i feel so lost
lying here in the dark....

in the dark..
i see the light....
but its so dim...
so it cant be right...

ill go away,,,
even if its wrong...
cuz i know for sure
Our love is strong....

here in the dark...
daughter of mine...
i so do need u....
im outta time....
By
K.M.
...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
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  • "in the dark..
    i see the light....
    but its so dim...
    so it cant be right..."

    It's only dim because you're IN the dark.

    Move a little closer,
    you'll find it bright.
    The difference
    between day and night.
    Move a little closer,
    nothing to fear.
    Make peace with the darkness,
    your love light, always near. :)

    {{Pearl_Jam_Necklace}}, your poem is so sad!!! I can feel the longing and the deep, deep sorrow--you're swimming in this sea of sadness....but you're still floating, wondering which direction to swim, and sometimes you struggle for air, but you're still floating there....fight the waves, break the surface, feel the light on your face, let it in and make for shore! There's life to be living and you've got so much more! :)

    I'm glad you're able to let it out, and thank you for sharing and reminding us how precious life can be---that we should cherish every moment we have.

    BTW--I'm glad you're still alive!!!!! :):)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • you areyou are Posts: 1,651
    i can relate to both of you and you're both amazing. loved what you two had to say.

    i agree with Being Enlightened - there is so much life out there Pearl Jam Necklace! i'm not making small of your pain, i just know that you are alive for a reason. i know it's hard to move on without someone you love, and it doesn't mean that you have to forget them. just take the memory of that person with you. they are still part of your life, just not in the way that you would really like it. i'll be praying for you. you've shared your story before and i haven't forgotten. my thoughts and prayers are with you. :);)
    No need to be void, or save up on life...
    You got to spend it all
  • thanks alot i know yall speak the truth and im trying i really am.
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
  • you areyou are Posts: 1,651
    thanks alot i know yall speak the truth and im trying i really am.

    at least you're trying. that means you havnen't given up.;) hang in there!
    No need to be void, or save up on life...
    You got to spend it all
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