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last minute scribblings........

rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
edited May 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
didnt work
will just have to wait :p
Rarghstarfarian.
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  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    Archaic Heirlooms

    Awakening Remissions
    Transmissions of seconds
    No start,
    No finish,
    -noooo stop…..

    Feeling the sparkles and dust of sand
    Reminding me of sacred, corporeal treasures,
    Dunes washing away my arrogance
    Exchanging earth for meaning
    Pride is on my soles.

    Bliss is what I create of it……………….
    Recurring sandfolds, monthly renewals
    Of life and space, riving breath,
    “Persistence of memory” a Dali image
    Aide memoires of taste and touch,
    Will never take it away….time
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    Jouissance.

    :)
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    interesting....

    i don't get the meaning, though... and while that is entirely my shortcoming, and i apologize... i still would like to know what you're saying here???

    i like the words as they are strung, but it feels like just as i am about to grasp comprehension, it elludes me
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    interesting....

    i don't get the meaning, though... and while that is entirely my shortcoming, and i apologize... i still would like to know what you're saying here???

    i like the words as they are strung, but it feels like just as i am about to grasp comprehension, it elludes me
    lol!
    i love ur honesty
    thank u for posting
    i see what ur saying....
    just posted without any editing really....

    my bf wanted me to wait until it was tight
    and something tangible...but did i listen to him? no
    i think im gonna edit it some more
    and maybe not put up as first draft ( or the first thing i think)

    i really appreciate ur honesty
    :D thank u
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • pompeypompey Posts: 10
    .
    W.A.S.T.E.
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    lol pomps
    maybe i should post some poems
    after i get a little experience
    me is just a virgin still lol
    trying too hard as a beginner?
    miss u :(
    ( cant wait to see perchy)
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    raugh...

    like i said, i really do like some of the words you've strung together... i wouldn't put too much into editing, or preparing "final drafts" or whatever... there's no need to be perfect here, goodness knows i've writen a bazillion poems, totally on the fly, that suck. but i don't care. doing so often gets me through some bad emotion, or some other emotion that distracts me from my schtuff... if it works, it works, if it doesn't? ha ha, well then, sorry if i've wasted anyone's time... i'm not really here to impress anyone (though i LOVE when I do) i'm more here to emote myself, get sympathy sometimes, and maybe share some of my vision

    and that's what i was going for in asking what this poem means...

    i appreciate the elusivity of this piece, and i'm usually pretty good at picking up a given emotion... i fail on this one and i really do just kinda want to know "how you are" :)

    it's beyond my place to say "you're getting there." ha ha... I have no idea where you're going, but... where ever it is you are, i can totally see the poet doing good things... grabbing good threads of thought and working them out in words....

    it's great :) i'm glad you've come :)
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    Originally posted by rarghrargh-brownstar
    -Never an ultimate waterloo



    HEY!!!!! WHAT ABOUT THE PRIDE ON THE SOULS?

    WHAT ABOUT THE SPARKLY SAND STUFF...



    PUT THAT POEM BACK IN HERE!!!


    :D;):D
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    raugh...

    like i said, i really do like some of the words you've strung together... i wouldn't put too much into editing, or preparing "final drafts" or whatever... there's no need to be perfect here, goodness knows i've writen a bazillion poems, totally on the fly, that suck. but i don't care. doing so often gets me through some bad emotion, or some other emotion that distracts me from my schtuff... if it works, it works, if it doesn't? ha ha, well then, sorry if i've wasted anyone's time... i'm not really here to impress anyone (though i LOVE when I do) i'm more here to emote myself, get sympathy sometimes, and maybe share some of my vision

    and that's what i was going for in asking what this poem means...

    i appreciate the elusivity of this piece, and i'm usually pretty good at picking up a given emotion... i fail on this one and i really do just kinda want to know "how you are" :)

    it's beyond my place to say "you're getting there." ha ha... I have no idea where you're going, but... where ever it is you are, i can totally see the poet doing good things... grabbing good threads of thought and working them out in words....

    it's great :) i'm glad you've come :)

    awww sorry i missed this one lol
    no! i liked what u wrote........i just realized i wasnt happy with some of the other stuff at the end cause i didnt develop it enough...thanks for the welcoming lol....darling, i have no idea where im going......who does??
    and as we know, ur stuff rocks ;)
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    thanks so much :D



    looking forward to seeing what you develop :)
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    Originally posted by pompey
    .
    :rolleyes:
    ur a special one dear :p
    ;)
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • pompeypompey Posts: 10
    Originally posted by rarghrargh-brownstar
    :rolleyes:
    ur a special one dear :p
    ;)

    well, i try

    ..
    W.A.S.T.E.
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    Originally posted by pompey
    well, i try

    ..
    try on other things
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    Originally posted by rarghrargh-brownstar
    try on other things
    like staying the same :)
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • pompeypompey Posts: 10
    Originally posted by rarghrargh-brownstar
    like staying the same :)

    you too

    it's not change...it's evolution
    (i hope)
    W.A.S.T.E.
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    Originally posted by pompey
    you too

    it's not change...it's evolution
    (i hope)
    evolution to become sweeter and more awesomer
    thank you
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • pompeypompey Posts: 10
    Originally posted by rarghrargh-brownstar
    evolution to become sweeter and more awesomer
    thank you

    sweeter like the chai tea sonum makes....which is to say, full of depth, and body, and character
    W.A.S.T.E.
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    Originally posted by pompey
    sweeter like the chai tea sonum makes....which is to say, full of depth, and body, and character
    thats sonum for ya

    and chai tea? are we forgetting something white boy? ;)
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • pompeypompey Posts: 10
    Originally posted by rarghrargh-brownstar
    thats sonum for ya

    and chai tea? are we forgetting something white boy? ;)

    don't blame me, man!
    blame starbucks!

    it's not my fault they've completely permeated the north american culture and unleashed a flood of redundant phraseologies onto its peoples.

    "chai tea", indeed

    hmph!
    W.A.S.T.E.
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    u need to converse with pastanazi
    and finsbury carrots
    they are of ur kind :D
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • pompeypompey Posts: 10
    i don't know if they'll accept me -- my name is so bland compared to theirs
    W.A.S.T.E.
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    Pompey was of the Second Triumvirate, with Mark Anthony and Octavius. He liked his wine, too.

    Pompey's also the nickname of Portsmouth United, and some city that had a bit of a lava incident a little while back.

    You're welcome, Pompey!

    :D
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    AND the site of the most awesome display of limey brits with techno-toys i've ever seen... though they spelled pompey wrong... with two i's and not a Y

    (did i perchance detect a hint of sarcasm??? if not, please... put one in there, where it rightly belongs.... i'm by no means intimate with the finer words in the language such as "phraseology"... i mean, I get it, but... well maybe i'd use it now? i dunno... what rhymes with phraseology? starbucksdazedeology??? coin it baby... :) send it to the mint, it's a keeper)



    how ya doing rarghragh?
  • pompeypompey Posts: 10
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    Pompey was of the Second Triumvirate, with Mark Anthony and Octavius. He liked his wine, too.

    Pompey's also the nickname of Portsmouth United, and some city that had a bit of a lava incident a little while back.

    You're welcome, Pompey!

    :D

    thanks finsbury

    i'm guessing portsmouth united is some sort of football club. unfortunately my only exposure to that fine sport is at the local crown and anchor, where game nights are always too violent to try and figure out which team is which (rowdy brits coming over here and scaring all the americans! ;).

    oh! my favorite reference to pompey comes from Measure for Measure:

    "Your bum is the greatest thing about you; so that, in the beastliest sense, you are Pompey the Great"

    Act 2, i believe

    it's juvenile humor, but it's also shakespeare, so i guess the one cancels out the other
    W.A.S.T.E.
  • pompeypompey Posts: 10
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    AND the site of the most awesome display of limey brits with techno-toys i've ever seen... though they spelled pompey wrong... with two i's and not a Y

    (did i perchance detect a hint of sarcasm??? if not, please... put one in there, where it rightly belongs.... i'm by no means intimate with the finer words in the language such as "phraseology"... i mean, I get it, but... well maybe i'd use it now? i dunno... what rhymes with phraseology? starbucksdazedeology??? coin it baby... :) send it to the mint, it's a keeper)



    how ya doing rarghragh?

    naw...i would never impose my sarcasm on strangers. Enemies, yes; strangers, no.

    and the last thing i would ever do is inflict more starbucks-related phraseologies onto the lexicon, man! i have enough trouble remembering that tall means little and grande means medium (and, as it were, that chai tea is actually redundant)
    W.A.S.T.E.
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    Pompey's the sixteenth/seventeenth century English spelling, PastaNazi. I think Roger Waters didn't get Shakespearean until "The Final Cut". :)

    Yes, Pompey, that's right! Your namesake was the loveable old tapster bawd who was summoned by the wordmangling Constable Elbow before Duke Escalus on the charge of keeping "a respected house" (er, a house of ill repute, a brothel).
    I love that scene. Most Shakespeare comedy requires a lot of prior background reading to understand, and even then it doesn't really raise any titters, but that scene in "Measure For Measure" is one of his better moments, IMO.

    Thanks for bringing that up!

    :)
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    AND the site of the most awesome display of limey brits with techno-toys i've ever seen... though they spelled pompey wrong... with two i's and not a Y

    (did i perchance detect a hint of sarcasm??? if not, please... put one in there, where it rightly belongs.... i'm by no means intimate with the finer words in the language such as "phraseology"... i mean, I get it, but... well maybe i'd use it now? i dunno... what rhymes with phraseology? starbucksdazedeology??? coin it baby... :) send it to the mint, it's a keeper)



    how ya doing rarghragh?
    hi missed u :(

    im just the cute gf
    i dont know this nerd talk
    but it does turn me on so ;)
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    Originally posted by rarghrargh-brownstar
    hi missed u :(

    im just the cute gf
    i dont know this nerd talk
    but it does turn me on so ;)


    i don't know the nerd talk either LOL


    but, sheelouie.... ain't it sexy?


    ?:D?:D?
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    i don't know the nerd talk either LOL


    but, sheelouie.... ain't it sexy?


    ?:D?:D?
    sheelouie??

    ur with them :(

    thats cool i dont mind taking on three
    heh-heh

    sheelouie...nice.....
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    i'm not really with them
    i can stand around and act like i know stuff
    and then about 12 hours later
    i might figure out what the heck was said :D


    i need a secret-bigword-decoder-ring

    or a glass of O-V-A-L-T-I-N-E


    or something ;)
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