BC highway

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Drive to Vancouver


Colossal tips of white-capped sugar
Of dreams in frosted glitter, a few shimmers
Turned matte

Calculating snowfalls, dust off of angel’s wings
On giant pillared triads o’ strength
Remaining stagnant
But moving on
As the drive takes east
And heads on…

Past swaying forests
Lush landscapes
Green diligence of honour
Feeding us breath

Among auburn sticks
A Brown mother’s trunks
In rows of soldiers
Birthing the faded emerald armor

Driving along the gray paved roads
Skies of pure blue backrops
Not too worried about destination.


(yeah i can work on this but im tired lol..........)

FinsburyParkCarrots

You've a real talent, R-B.

of_the_girl

your imagery is so lovely, Ruby. SO beautiful!! I will agree with Finsbury and say you've got a real talent.

hugs,
Jessie

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Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
You've a real talent, R-B.

that means alot, considering i wrote it last nite when i was half alseep
and it means not only a lot cause ur a literary expert and expert writer, but cause ur such an empathetic and caring individual.

( i ve read ur stuff, i bet u can make the phonebook sound entertaining lol)

rarghrargh-brownstar

Originally posted by of_the_girl
your imagery is so lovely, Ruby. SO beautiful!! I will agree with Finsbury and say you've got a real talent.

hugs,
Jessie

i ve read ur stuff
its hard for me to respond back cause i never know what to say
lol...........ur the one with talent .....ur poems are soo real
and universal- everyone can relate!

ur the bestestest ever.
write more .........i love it!!!

*hugs*