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Nurture- antithesis

rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
edited April 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Hurting me

Is justified by the power of giving me preliminary life

Begun Existence from your womb



Advise me that I am meaningless, countless days of subsistence

Is something that can be quite disregarded

But it is the control that crushes me

Into a lab-rat of confusion

Catering to ur sick world of endless defeat





Everyday feedings, forked meticulously

Ur only love u can give me
Rarghstarfarian.
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  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    i like the defiance.. also reminds me of Animal as in "why would you want to hurt me" i like it very much
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    Originally posted by olderman
    i like the defiance.. also reminds me of Animal as in "why would you want to hurt me" i like it very much
    thanks
    u explained it really well
    like not really complaining, but also confused
    "why would u want to hurt me" i love it

    :D
    Rarghstarfarian.
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