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Want

JaidraJaidra Posts: 57
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
WANT

in pliant gripping
need
i writhe
a cavernous
scream
i hide

dismiss
all else

forget
myself

summoning
urging
trembling
stirring

tides shift
i drift

won’t you be
in want with me?
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Comments

  • savannah66savannah66 Posts: 65
    Lost to desire & wanting...
    nice, Jaidra, thanks for sharing.

    The tides and the moon seem to be on everyone's mind...
  • JaidraJaidra Posts: 57
    I have a bad habit of posting poems late at night. By the next day they are halfway down the page - mostly overlooked.

    So BUMP (or should I be saying SPANK around here?) ;)

    Hope you guys don't mind taking another look. Thanks.
  • mulacmulac Posts: 97
    Originally posted by Jaidra
    . By the next day they are halfway down the page - mostly overlooked.

    i get that too. but i think thats just cos i suck


    but yeah i think this is a gem of a poem

    i don't normally like ryhming stuff but for some reason this one really caught my eye

    thanks
    the passenger is life
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