first sight

rapscallionyouthrapscallionyouth Posts: 28
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
the first sight of you
my lust comes and rushes through
stuck in that image of you
my mind undressed your slender body
a form made only by a god almighty
who could really say thats a sin
being lost in your perfect skin
i dreamed of beauty like you
every world i have been
asked myself if a touch
could only be the best way to die
i tried hard to look away
but you already caught my eye
and you know what they loudly say
send a smile and speak with perfect lips
tease me with your looks
pain me with those shaking hips
tell me your name
ill say it over and over
its perfect just the same
ill feel this dim light
and feel our hearts rythmic beat
thinking of tasting you
from head to feet
ill dance and hold against you
high off of your sweet breath
know now that my blood rushes for you
craving to make you wet
the way you move against me
the harder my body gets
the energy between us grows
begging for it to be unleashed
we know this makes perfect sense
because it makes no sense at all
start off for the night
find the perfect place for us tonight
doing something so wrong
makes us feel so right
kiss me low kiss me high
you are so damn hot
touching you makes me want to cry
this moment of passion we wont fight
slide me into your mouth
and let my tongue wet your appetite
fingers and hands run slow
over perfect nerves
and perfect slopes
kissing your breathing breasts
as i melt myself into your pleasing hopes
our touching skin makes such a sweet noise
i am just as lost and free
with your soft and loudly moaning voice
tell me what your closed eyes can see
i have my mind open wide
the climbing height of our pleasure
like a horse with an unbreaking stride
no emotion could be more sure
oncoming waves and rising tides
this intoxication
the perfectness of our motion
the lack of our moderation
this long awaited internal explosion
tingling in all parts true and right
the time stops and lets us be
in our desperately lonely night
the world revolves around you and me
at that first sight
i knew you could set me free
I make the shapes come much too close
I pull my eyes out
Hold my breath
And wait until I shake...
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Comments

  • Wow. That is steamier than a sauna... Very nice work... are you a Scorpio by chance?... (just kidding) :)

    thanks for sharing.
  • very erotic!! i like it...
    Don't need a raincoat, I'm already wet..
  • i LIKE this a lot.
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • Thanks, everyone.

    I'm a sagitarius... :)
    I make the shapes come much too close
    I pull my eyes out
    Hold my breath
    And wait until I shake...
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    Well done!
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • whoaaa. :D
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
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