Krispy Kreme Booth Dawn

cassiacassia Posts: 277
edited January 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
KRISPY KREME BOOTH DAWN
the spin side----


rhapsody of doughnuts! sugar stars
the predawn shivers of intoxicant desire!
drive on, drive on, through 7 degree dark
up the hill to fresh smell evaporating dough--
the oddities of pumpkin spice old fashioneds
key lime cheesecake dizzily deciding
chocolates and .......sugar rushing
circular mushcakes, sips java
bold bold bold (more shivers)
UNTIL color-ahoy!!
and yes from the window walling
the booth we sit, we see the
first flares of purple lighting the deep grey
clouds...succulent pinks magenta fuschia
tickles of lavender, roses bending back to pink
neon apricot streudeling atop hard-pressed
lemon golds ohmygod colorgasmic excitations
of pushing suncolor spinning
ohmygod deep oranges, palest whisperiest
pale green quail's egg blue leafing over
now new white cloud streaks THE BASE IS
GLOWING now now through black gnarled branches
of wizard trees, the intense ballet
of PURE GOLD RISING
and laughingly i say ohmygod it looks
like sun on the lake
and SMILLLLLLLLLLE DUH CUZ
HELLO IT IS THE SUN
but what do i know cuz im blonde
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  • I hate doughnuts but I like this, it made me :)!

    "the oddities of pumpkin spice old fashioneds"--my favorite line

    I'm Pumpkin!

    And I'm looking for Peter Peter. :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • dyaogirldyaogirl Posts: 138
    colorgasmic excitations

    and a good morning to you!
    '..... Ah! A perfect illustration of the poststructuralist paradox. Does the signifier "Merlot" correspond with the 'truth' of the bottle I polished off last night, or do we hold in our thoughts a different "signified" of bottle-of-Merlot-ness? Perhaps we're dreaming of the same bottle!" -FinsburyParkCarrots

  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
    ooh dyao, you little wizardress

    BLISS WEAVER
  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
    "waitin' for a bottle of truth"
    --Pete Yorn


    and,
    if a bottle falls
    in the forest,
    and no one's sober
    enough to hear it....

    does it make a SOUND

    of sound mind/
    cometh
    the rain

    ferry me, oh ferry me HOME
    i love
    pretty things: you

    diamond-glazed potatoes of my gladness
    sparkle spuds :)
  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Colorgasmic excitations......


    I'll be changing the lyrics to those Beach Boys songs forevermore........
  • dyaogirldyaogirl Posts: 138
    LOL

    Good good good good vibrations!

    LOL

    Yeh, me too!
    '..... Ah! A perfect illustration of the poststructuralist paradox. Does the signifier "Merlot" correspond with the 'truth' of the bottle I polished off last night, or do we hold in our thoughts a different "signified" of bottle-of-Merlot-ness? Perhaps we're dreaming of the same bottle!" -FinsburyParkCarrots

  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Right, then, dyaogirl...
    We've got to synchronise watches.....
    If you have "Good Vibrations" on CD or tape, play it exactly as your clock turns the hour....we'll sing it together, across the Atlantic....


    Simultaneous colorgasmic excitations LOL!!!!!



    Love
    Finsbury
  • dyaogirldyaogirl Posts: 138
    Wellll....all right then, I love to "synchronize" you know! he he he:)
    (BTW don't forget the Merlot!)
    '..... Ah! A perfect illustration of the poststructuralist paradox. Does the signifier "Merlot" correspond with the 'truth' of the bottle I polished off last night, or do we hold in our thoughts a different "signified" of bottle-of-Merlot-ness? Perhaps we're dreaming of the same bottle!" -FinsburyParkCarrots

  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
    ok so while you're all sipping and giddy in Merlot magic,
    i'm too ghetto with the 'ghetti
    as
    i (cheap cheap twist top haha)
    gulping
    the Lambrusco.....

    wow i think it was like $3 a bottle
    good buzz though
    :)

    good vibrations and great fibulations

    COLORATIONS saturations
    hot wet dripping melting Chianti candle wax,
    so
    Retro....

    and the lava lamp sings GOOD< Good, Good
    Good Vibrations

    ahahahah ahaha ahahaha ahaha..........

    and everytime i hear Good Vibrations i think of the first time i drank a Sunkist ORANGE soda pop......

    otter whisks~~~
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