HARDCORE/ WAR SEX METAL (for boys who hate love)

cassiacassia Posts: 277
edited January 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
HARDCORE/ WAR SEX METAL
(for boys who hate love)

Torch blood speed
I wanna fuck something
I wanna break something
kill fuck destroy
RAGE
–/slash
evolution of a nightmare
hard edge hardcore
hot breeding reality dogs
fuel my collision pain
crank alien cigarette butts
trash thrash metallic raze–
burn stare down Death
he’s one ugly fucka
dog piss deathwish
blitzed whores hard
needles bones bullshit
junkie monkey wrenched
acid napalm bad disease
spawn the eNemy

mindghetto memoryhate
gonna puke you out
of every inch of my cells
bitch rip suck this
Resident Evil cornmashed
whiskey blew his brains out
in the bathroom swallow hard
then spit wheel crush monster
meat bullets toxic raw shrieks
choke freeze smack smoke
glitter sex zombie rot
roadkill porn thrill
my face slammed hard
in concrete broken glass
blue red sirens I taste
my existence
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  • Whoa! Now dats hardcore! Ripper! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • phishgodphishgod Posts: 133
    damn honey!
    & I thought I
    knew you?

    you can really
    rocky and roll
    with da boys LBQ

    and well uh,
    ok, da wedding's.....
    still on but....
    let's talk
    about your "aesthetic"
    with the counselor...


    rofl
    ILY
    yr boy
    rockon,
    phishgod
  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
    i'ze dah RIPPAH

    dangah dangah

    girl in the dugout
    bra-free zone
    trenches

    heavy metal....ah, reminds me of a good story...once at a hippy faire in Oregon, phish told me of this tent where they were making all these cool metal Xena-type she-warrior breast plates and such....only prob was

    it was about 100 degrees out and a couple chicks put on this armor and scorched themselves radically....and had to make a run for it to the river.....

    :)

    :)
  • Originally posted by cassia
    i'ze dah RIPPAH

    dangah dangah

    girl in the dugout
    bra-free zone
    trenches

    heavy metal....ah, reminds me of a good story...once at a hippy faire in Oregon, phish told me of this tent where they were making all these cool metal Xena-type she-warrior breast plates and such....only prob was

    it was about 100 degrees out and a couple chicks put on this armor and scorched themselves radically....and had to make a run for it to the river.....

    :)

    :)

    Ha! Ha! Burn! ;)

    Burn those treacherous titty tops! Burn them all (eh?)! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Whoa, Beavis .... huh-huh.... huh....

    What was that last post?
  • Cassia, yer poem: a perfect evocation of that mentality.... just left out the zits and the pus, and having to tidy one's bedroom when mom says so.....! :)
  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
    yes, Finstah,

    that's it. It's elementary. :)

    ALSO i wanted to take punk-chic (squiggles)
    and by collaging montaging my anti-words
    yet still bizarrely creating a music...
    why, just now, kicking back...
    i'm amused at the slant rhyming
    going on in "dog piss deathwish"
    ~~~
  • A band is doubtless forming and realising its vision using that name, as we speak....:)
    I don't want to imagine the band artwork though....
  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
    good one..................Finsberries, Dollfins...dol--phinsberryperkkarats....'to name a thing' .....

    so i see a Rotweiller leaking on a fire hydrant shaped like a magnum ... or some such gunny ....a pit bull, a razorblade...
    yes, really very messy anyway you look at it.....
    a terrier just not frightening enough (although once i saw a punk guy fully decked pins pierce pseudo-goth black plaid spiked coif whole bit ...and super Krazee...get this: he was walking a tiny chihuahua dog in the park.....

    whee...

    oh bye the bye,

    did so want to tell you that i was thoroughly enchanted
    with your phishspin emulata....especially
    the part where you were viscous and gleeful





    (belly giggles....)

    now in all things we should torque, be thickly oozing and glad, full of our very own self, and full of eruptions and subtletations....
    above all things, keep to society...to those 'gossamer wings of irony'.......ge :)
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    Originally posted by cassia
    HARDCORE/ WAR SEX METAL
    (for boys who hate love)

    dog piss deathwish
    blitzed whores hard
    needles bones bullshit...
    ...
    whiskey blew his brains out
    in the bathroom swallow hard
    then spit wheel crush monster
    meat bullets toxic raw shrieks
    choke freeze smack smoke
    glitter sex zombie rot
    roadkill porn thrill
    my face slammed hard
    in concrete broken glass
    blue red sirens I taste
    my existence





    please...



















    just allow me this....


















    once more....




























    FUCK YES...





    goddamn girl FUCK!
    It's all yellow.


  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
    KCUF
    KCUF
    IS
    Enough already...........

    BIG TANGY YELLOW GNIKCUF SMILES

    SLAM dat on yr guitar, bahhhhhhhhhhhh

    (and the chorus sang:
    whee :)

    ~~~

    help me, i've risen, and i can't get down
    cassiaism
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    sorry, sorry... i fugging dig cussin on da board :)



    :)


    really, i like this piece a lot, thank you for sharing it :)
    It's all yellow.


  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
    :)
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    then spit wheel crush monster
    meat bullets toxic raw shrieks
    choke freeze smack smoke
    glitter sex zombie rot



    it's dem words dat make it for me :)
    It's all yellow.


  • metillic licks and needle sick

    cassia,
    an
    umbra starburst

    but....

    BEWARE THE DARKSIDE;)
  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
    this is TRULY AWFUL ohmygod i was possessed hahaha
    but phish said some guys were sick of love and nature poems...so just thought i'd throw out some chum for the sharks, giggles

    and most of the words cum from reading old rollins punk poems and i just distilled the essence of evil, Goodone

    only my friend calls me and says I HOPE YOU NEVER WRITE ANYTHING like that again,

    wheeeeeeeeeeeeee

    dog piss death wishes,

    :)
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    truly awful in what sense?
    the words sound like a car crash
    and EVERYBODY looks when there's a car crash

    the content is not so important
    it's the resulting emotion felt in the void afterward
    having been exposed to these images


    i like it

    :A
    It's all yellow.


  • Possession is not bad
    especially when writing.

    I like both your darkside and your roseside.
    :)
  • cassiacassia Posts: 277
    yeh, i like that yellow
    a car crash

    and the cool aftertaste
    of smashed chrome

    in a gutter of dark roses


    (mistress of ghoul whee)
    snarls
    purr-
    ingly

    surfergirl rises proudly and says I AM THE ANTI-GOTH

    ****
    radar, im glad you like both sides.
    spank.
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    Originally posted by cassia

    and the cool aftertaste
    of smashed chrome


    i just wonder what you've got your finger plugged into

    you are an inspiration :)
    It's all yellow.


  • Originally posted by cassia
    yeh, i like that yellow
    a car crash

    and the cool aftertaste
    of smashed chrome

    Makes you hear "Last Kiss" a bit differently, next time around....:)
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    one night thunder cracked,
    mercy backed outside her windowsill
    dreamed i was flying high above the trees, over the hills
    looked down into the house of mary
    bare bulb on, newspaper-covered walls,
    and mary rising up above it all
    next morning on the way into town
    saw some skid marks and followed them around
    over the curve, through the fields, into the house of mary
    that what you fear the most, could meet you halfway



    my most fave musical car crash
    the key changes
    echo
    that cool aftertaste of chrome
    It's all yellow.


  • felt the fishtail
    felt heart pounding
    felt the metal
    hitting the concrete
    contorting
    bending
    glass breaking
    roof caving
    belt digging
    pavement
    sparks
    lights
    out






    Just felt like sharing since it was kinda, sorta taking that direction. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    oooh, right on :)
    It's all yellow.


  • Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    felt the fishtail
    felt heart pounding
    felt the metal
    hitting the concrete
    contorting
    bending
    glass breaking
    roof caving
    belt digging
    pavement
    sparks
    lights
    out






    Just felt like sharing since it was kinda, sorta taking that
    direction. :)
    and then Even Flow came on and you were glad to be alive ;)
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    thoughts arise like butterflies
    It's all yellow.


  • Just bumpin' dah world's greatest thread!

    :D
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