Sometimes a Poem Fails

BhagavadGita

Originally posted by phishgod
But not
this one,
my lover!

If one
line could
change a
life, create
a whole
new order
of this
world, turn
it inside
out, and
upside down,
shake it
quivering into
a whole
new life,
then this--
one line
(smiling, as
two lines
became one):

"for the words are never shiny as the stars
and i cannot photograph the rhythmic light of longing."

taken from
our duet
thread (hard
to believe
written now,
two years ago
and before
we'd even
met!), still
links us,
forever as
published together,
first time,
the forgotten
'zine of
our finding,
and if
there was
one piece
of all
those 200,
or all
those before,
or after,
or still,
this is
the One--
from my
One, to
me, that
probably always
will be,
of all your
most wonderful,
the One,
that brought
us to
this life
together,
& this still
grabs me
by the
heart and
yanks me
by its
strings,
takes it
to a whole
new level,
changed our
world, forever,
brought bliss,
to be followed,
and opened
doors to
our now
remembered future.

And now,
I long
no "more".

I love you.
You are Beautiful.
I am grateful.

yr boy

SEE THERE IS AN EXAMPLE!

in my sad fucked up and elephant man heart, i actually believe YOU phishgod are ed and that poem was to me deb.

but then i dont believe it and now you know how sick i really am.