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Underneath

nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
edited May 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
There's a lady
who I hold up
in my world
a fallen soul
who's feet touched the earth
from the beginning
I could see
she was more, she is more
she is everything..
I've never understood
how an Angel
such as this
could see herself as less
could see herself
as his..
for a chance
to let her see
through my eyes
towards my soul
I'll cast my friendship at her feet
my heart
hidden underneath
Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
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Comments

  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    you beautiful lovely love :D

    *hugs and kisses cast at your feet*
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    that was sooooo pretty. :) beautiful, nailz :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    awww.....thank you coleen and Jessie.....(blushing)
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    aaw very nice!! beautiful, in fact.

    I loved the ending verses

    I'll cast my friendship at her feet
    my heart
    hidden underneath
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    Thanks Buru...
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    Has anybody else out there felt this way about a friend?
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
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