Thinking Back
nailz100
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Her brown hair glistened in the rain
it was late
and the champagne sky poured down
upon her tanned skin
the bumps of the goose arose
and layed upon her
upon the satin, upon the silk
as the moon rose up
and in that instant shone brighter
than the likes of which I had ever seen
her bare shoulders naked in the moonlight
and her hair draped down
long and wavy
soft and soaked by the world..
she looked at me and smiled,
she always smiled her smile
How I wanted to touch her being
and to lift her up
high
amongst the moon that shone upon her
amongst the stars
to caress her every magnificence
on the outside and in
but alas, her beauty was not mine
to cherish and explore
he couldn't see it for what it truly was
but I could, it was clear as that night
It was almost as if the moon had made her more stunning
as if that were possible...
I look now at the time gone by
and I realize
I realize what is perfectly clear
what was always perfectly clear
for she will always be the one
smiling in the champagne moonlight
as transparent as the sky
and as constant as the sun
like my feelings for her
will always be
have always been..
it was late
and the champagne sky poured down
upon her tanned skin
the bumps of the goose arose
and layed upon her
upon the satin, upon the silk
as the moon rose up
and in that instant shone brighter
than the likes of which I had ever seen
her bare shoulders naked in the moonlight
and her hair draped down
long and wavy
soft and soaked by the world..
she looked at me and smiled,
she always smiled her smile
How I wanted to touch her being
and to lift her up
high
amongst the moon that shone upon her
amongst the stars
to caress her every magnificence
on the outside and in
but alas, her beauty was not mine
to cherish and explore
he couldn't see it for what it truly was
but I could, it was clear as that night
It was almost as if the moon had made her more stunning
as if that were possible...
I look now at the time gone by
and I realize
I realize what is perfectly clear
what was always perfectly clear
for she will always be the one
smiling in the champagne moonlight
as transparent as the sky
and as constant as the sun
like my feelings for her
will always be
have always been..
Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
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i can see his eyes right now,looking deeply into mine and feeling his warm breath on my mouth,rich with excitement.thank you.
all gorgeous thoughts and love to you always.
This is truly beautiful....
*keeps tingling*
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like my feelings for her
will always be
have always been..."
"Tattooed everything..."
"I know someday you'll have a beautiful life.
I know you'll be a star in somebody else's sky but why, why, why can't it be, oh, can't it be mine?"
Your poem kinda made me think of Black. I love it, nailz! Great schtuff!
I didn't really intend the poem to be sad in any way...as I think black kind of is. This person will always be a part of my life and the only thing I want for her now and always is to be happy. That would make me happiest of all.
For a chance to let her see
through my eyes
toward my soul
I'll cast my friendship at her feet
My heart hidden underneath
You know he is one of Pearl Jam greatest inspirations
Thank you for those beautiful words nailz.
(Angelina Jolie)
to view a piece of your soul.
It was lonely and lost and out of control.
I stepped through the doorway of your mind
to study the avalanche of your tears.
But I was forgotten there, like too many years...
Gone by.
I swam through the sea that was your desire
and saw that you did not want me.
I am overlooked.
A blackened memory.
Like a hidden tattoo...
I am concealed behind your guilt
and smothered beneath your fear.
I am what once was
and I am what can never be.
I was your first and only
You are my last and lonely.
There is no scenic view from here...
only the broken ornament that was
a ring
the shattered promise that was
a dream
And my words...
Falling like a pile of leaves
at your feet.
"Speaking as a child of the 90's..."