Right now

nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I got it...
perfect clarity
for once the words I have been searching for
to describe the way that I feel
and what I have been feeling
I know it may not last long
but now
right now I have the perfect vision
of what I want to say to you
it's like I have lifted my head from under the water
that has been drowning me for months
If only for a second
before I am submersed in darkness again
no answers have I found
no answers have been given
just words
which is more than I had before
which is enough to put a temporary smile on my face
which is enough for me to explain myself
which is more than I could ask for... right now
Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
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  • KovoKovo Posts: 255
    I like it :D
    I shouldn't have to fight a battle I'll never win, just to lose those I've never had.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    which is more than you could hope for......let's hope you get some more glimpses of happiness........it's so lonely when you're in a dark hole all on your own......and you jus get so mean.......but everything is possible......so don't drown yet ;)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    And right now, that clarity is gone again
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    nailz100 wrote:
    I got it...
    perfect clarity
    for once the words I have been searching for
    to describe the way that I feel
    and what I have been feeling
    I know it may not last long
    but now
    right now I have the perfect vision
    of what I want to say to you
    it's like I have lifted my head from under the water
    that has been drowning me for months

    I like the last two lines that I reposted about lifting your head from the water.Very good read to that.
    Your subject matter is very intense.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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