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more of my crappy writing?

sayang_annabelsayang_annabel Posts: 20
edited December 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
shall i bother to post more? or have i bored u all enough? :p
and so castles made of sand fall in the sea eventually...
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    HEY! That wasn't a poem! :D or was it? :p
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • sayang_annabelsayang_annabel Posts: 20
    could be considered art nouveau i suppose......hmm....
    and so castles made of sand fall in the sea eventually...
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
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    Here's my contribution. :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • sayang_annabelsayang_annabel Posts: 20
    profound stuff..... i might have to quote u on that to make myself seem intelligent :)
    and so castles made of sand fall in the sea eventually...
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by sayang_annabel
    profound stuff..... i might have to quote u on that to make myself seem intelligent :)

    LOL! No, no, no! Please quote this one if you wish to come off as intelligent:

    ;):o:p:D !!!!!
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ---O O---
    ----O
    ----O
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • sayang_annabelsayang_annabel Posts: 20
    god no! that contains too much profundity! might make their brains implode with thought!!!
    i might just do an interpretive dance inspired by it instead hahahaha :p
    and so castles made of sand fall in the sea eventually...
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by sayang_annabel
    god no! that contains too much profundity! might make their brains implode with thought!!!
    i might just do an interpretive dance inspired by it instead hahahaha :p

    I like the idea of imploding brains, sounds so gooey and sticky. I may have to make an even more profounder (:D) statement!

    Oh yeah, make sure your dance includes a hula hoop! It would not be complete without a hula hoop or two. And, if you feel daring, may I also suggest a few yo-yo tricks, you know, walk the dog in your right hand and an around the world in your left, something like that.

    Now that's inspirational! :D I feel like putting on my red shoes and dancing now boy! ;)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • sayang_annabelsayang_annabel Posts: 20
    gooey and sticky imploding brains... would be interesting i must admit.
    i shall have to go in the search of a couple of hula hoops....yoyo tricks are a definite possibility!!
    ARGH revision....must revise must revise....angry mother not a good thing. shall have to ponder such intense thoughts another time lol. ah feck...so much revision so little time...
    yeah so interpretive dance- could hire some dancing munchkins to sing along in the background- ooooh and they could wear brightly coloured kilts!
    yes revision....revision revision revision......BLEURGH
    and so castles made of sand fall in the sea eventually...
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by sayang_annabel
    gooey and sticky imploding brains... would be interesting i must admit.
    i shall have to go in the search of a couple of hula hoops....yoyo tricks are a definite possibility!!
    ARGH revision....must revise must revise....angry mother not a good thing. shall have to ponder such intense thoughts another time lol. ah feck...so much revision so little time...
    yeah so interpretive dance- could hire some dancing munchkins to sing along in the background- ooooh and they could wear brightly coloured kilts!
    yes revision....revision revision revision......BLEURGH

    And if it please the ladies, the munchkins could go commando under their kilts. :eek:

    And speaking of munchkins, I'd also like to ask Cousin It to join in, I love that little guy, he's so hairy and man, you wanna talk profound, this guy makes Noam Chomsky look like a blethering idiot! :)

    And do take your time, we want a polished production! ;)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • sayang_annabelsayang_annabel Posts: 20
    lol and a polished production it shall be....just wait til after my exams and i shall get started. damned exams...get in the way of the important stuff.
    and so castles made of sand fall in the sea eventually...
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by sayang_annabel
    lol and a polished production it shall be....just wait til after my exams and i shall get started. damned exams...get in the way of the important stuff.

    I know! Work tries to get in my way but I push it aside, put my middle fingers in the air and scream a BIG FUCK YOU at it!

    But school is important missy, so, get to work and pass all those exams with flying colours, you hear me! Our masterpiece can wait until your triumphant return. :D

    Take care! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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