some of my crappy writing :D
sayang_annabel
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yeah so errrm...
all the hungry souls cried in chorus
to the prince as he entered the domain.
every imperfect step screamed beauty
and his mind pondered the colours so bright
they were yet to be discovered by most
but he had seen them since he could remember.
that laugh, so filled with humility and so stunning
that none could remove the yearning
to hear it some more from their hearts.
this was the difference. this was beauty.
men lost all sense as women lost all restraint
as the beat of the drums bore consciences
from those free of guilt. all wondered
if they were worthy of the sight. This
sight that would make such changes.
immense. the saviours of mundane lives.
all the hungry souls cried in chorus
to the prince as he entered the domain.
every imperfect step screamed beauty
and his mind pondered the colours so bright
they were yet to be discovered by most
but he had seen them since he could remember.
that laugh, so filled with humility and so stunning
that none could remove the yearning
to hear it some more from their hearts.
this was the difference. this was beauty.
men lost all sense as women lost all restraint
as the beat of the drums bore consciences
from those free of guilt. all wondered
if they were worthy of the sight. This
sight that would make such changes.
immense. the saviours of mundane lives.
and so castles made of sand fall in the sea eventually...
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not crap at all
no, not at all
"breathe, breathe in the air...don't be afraid to care...leave but don't leave me...look around and choose your own ground...for long you live and high you fly...and smiles you'll give and tears you'll cry...and all you touch and all you see...is all your life will ever be..."