Nothingness

Julijana

Here is another one depressing poem for you all.


Nothingness


Uncertainty is nothing but a pain,
pain is nothing but a waste of heart,
heart is nothing but a damaged fruit,
hidden spectrum seldom felt in art.

Detramental ignorance in sorrow,
deems emotion's nothing but abyss,
pit of darkness,obsolete duration,
tainted by the nothingness of bliss.

Once acceptance sheds last gasps of hope,
all is dead,finished,and extinct,
vacancy of tenderness begone,
our two faiths may nevermore be linked.

Being Enlightened

I like the taste of damaged fruit.

||Release_Me||

Originally posted by Julijana
Here is another one depressing poem for you all.


Nothingness


Uncertainty is nothing but a pain,
pain is nothing but a waste of heart,
heart is nothing but a damaged fruit,
hidden spectrum seldom felt in art.

Detramental ignorance in sorrow,
deems emotion's nothing but abyss,
pit of darkness,obsolete duration,
tainted by the nothingness of bliss.

Once acceptance sheds last gasps of hope,
all is dead,finished,and extinct,
vacancy of tenderness begone,
our two faiths may nevermore be linked.

wow, that one really hit home with me. I rarely, if never, post here but i was reading and this one grabbed me by the throat. It's a brilliant poem, and it's really touched me. thank you.

seekit

you've explained my depression at time brillantly.........
thank you.

||Release_Me||

Originally posted by seekit
you've explained my depression at time brillantly.........
thank you.

agreed. sums up how i feel.

Julijana

Thank you all for all your kind responses.It really makes me feel great that you like, and could relate to my poem.Those are the best replies I could have gotten.