Nothingness

Julijana
Julijana Posts: 18
edited January 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Here is another one depressing poem for you all.


Nothingness


Uncertainty is nothing but a pain,
pain is nothing but a waste of heart,
heart is nothing but a damaged fruit,
hidden spectrum seldom felt in art.

Detramental ignorance in sorrow,
deems emotion's nothing but abyss,
pit of darkness,obsolete duration,
tainted by the nothingness of bliss.

Once acceptance sheds last gasps of hope,
all is dead,finished,and extinct,
vacancy of tenderness begone,
our two faiths may nevermore be linked.
once you know
you can never go back...
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  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    I like the taste of damaged fruit.





















    ;)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • ||Release_Me||
    ||Release_Me|| Posts: 1,871
    Originally posted by Julijana
    Here is another one depressing poem for you all.


    Nothingness


    Uncertainty is nothing but a pain,
    pain is nothing but a waste of heart,
    heart is nothing but a damaged fruit,
    hidden spectrum seldom felt in art.

    Detramental ignorance in sorrow,
    deems emotion's nothing but abyss,
    pit of darkness,obsolete duration,
    tainted by the nothingness of bliss.

    Once acceptance sheds last gasps of hope,
    all is dead,finished,and extinct,
    vacancy of tenderness begone,
    our two faiths may nevermore be linked.

    wow, that one really hit home with me. I rarely, if never, post here but i was reading and this one grabbed me by the throat. It's a brilliant poem, and it's really touched me. thank you.
    "This town deserves a better class of criminal... and I'm gonna give it to them."

  • seekit
    seekit Posts: 73
    you've explained my depression at time brillantly.........
    thank you.
    Seek It
  • ||Release_Me||
    ||Release_Me|| Posts: 1,871
    Originally posted by seekit
    you've explained my depression at time brillantly.........
    thank you.

    agreed. sums up how i feel.
    "This town deserves a better class of criminal... and I'm gonna give it to them."

  • Julijana
    Julijana Posts: 18
    Thank you all for all your kind responses.It really makes me feel great that you like, and could relate to my poem.Those are the best replies I could have gotten.
    once you know
    you can never go back...

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